Hi everyone, Author here.I am not comfortable giving reviews on my own work, it feels a lot like self adulation to me (Which I've always likened to narcissism.)Anyways let's go to the reason why you are here. The book. Er... no, the review for the book.The Primordial Record is not a fast paced book. But because it's a web novel, I tried to skim across overly long descriptions, to make a tighter story. I may have failed, you my dear readers would be the judge of that.Based on the settings of my book, which is Transmigration. The MC is swamped in a flood of deceit and lies. And because I made him overpowered, I had to balance that with really dangerous enemies, that understands the capabilities of the MC and make every confrontation a deadly affair. I abhor weak and stupid antagonist.From the start he would be placed in a unfavorable position and he would need every wit and cunning he possess to win.I would not be leaving obvious hints, I left many Setups and I trust my readers to figure them out as they proceed with the story, for I am a fan of puzzles, and if you stick around long enough, I hope you would be surprised by the Payoffs.The Primordial Record may not be an easy book to read, and I sincerely apologize for that. I left details of certain abilities and the world itself vague, as it is a huge world and I dont like info-dumps. There are many horrifying themes presented inside and spoilers warning. I am willing to kill off characters, if it would serve the story.I hope you enjoy this world. Because ultimately that is the reason I write. For your pleasure. Bricktrader.
Just thought I will cheat a little by leaving myself a 5.0 review.Do note that this is going to be a slow-paced story for the most part, so it might not be for those who are seeking constant action.Feel free to ask any questions here, if any. I will answer to the best of my abilities as long as it will not result in any major spoilers.
This novel presents a very poor use of the English language, and the power levels and different rankings are ten times worse. However, the novel stands out with a unique and exceptional protagonist. He is incredibly intelligent and lacks empathy for others as long as it benefits him. He will go beyond all limits to obtain what he desires, showing no concern for others and sacrificing millions of lives as if they mean nothing. His journey towards immortality seems to be solitary, without even friends or someone he can trust, even a little. Despite these negative aspects, the novel is remarkably wonderful and enjoyable to read, and I highly recommend it to experience a truly unique story.
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this novel was taken from somewhere else, I remember starting to read it a few years back but dropped it for being too tedious to read, I don't know if it's a stolen novel or a repost cuz I couldn't care less
IDEA AND STORY IS GOOD BUT TRANSLATION IS
Ughhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh characterssssssssssssssssssss why do we need 140 characters its so dumb Webnovel's system is so dumb they are money hungry bastards this book is good
This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this.
I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say...
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love the story, really entertaining so far...................................
love the story, really entertaining so far...................................
love the story, really entertaining so far...................................
love the story, really entertaining so far...................................
The synopsis, tags and name of the novel don't add up with chapter 2 and forward.
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Its fine as a trial read...its not great or bad ...the first 30 chapters without a fight were boring but after that it started becoming slightly interesting ...
The conversation seems a bit forced, its not even funny. I only give it reviews because the concept is unique, if not for that, I woul just straight leave here. So I hope it would improve. Might come back later if it improves