Rohan_Roy_5728
I've only read 11 chapters of this book and it's nice, but what about the web comic on webtoon need a new chapter soon.
What can i say other than superb? This book is a masterpiece in the making. If you want a system novel with fresh ideas and unique takes on things then this is the book for you. ??
It really is great and funny in my opinion the update is a bit slow because author have other works it's better to read it in SCRIBLEHUB the update is earlier.
Really a meh story, since the system got upgraded the story has become a list. First of all the mc is not the mc ( since the start of the book the mc was interesting only in the first 40 chapter after that the mc only stays at home with literally no adventures) at first it was ok because we could still read the adventures of the "human tools" but after the system got upgraded we only have a list and no story or background example:human tool 1: stays in a cave for 20000 years and cultivates to soul formation then dies. reward for the mc one upgrade in cultivation.That's literally the story. like That's it you have no adventure no background explanation. no enemies you are just told that they stay in a cave cultivate for Thousands of years and the mc gets super rewarded.However cultivation levels stop making sense, the mc advances super fast and the author dosen't bother to explain what each level does, you are just told that the mc is super strong and every 2 chapters the name of his cultivation level changes but again you will never be explained what it does. so to you it's all the same.All in all it started good and ended in shi*
Author here! Almost 200 chapters. New readers may think that this story is about the MC chasing a villainess girl and then they fall in love. Well, that's how it sounds, right? However, it's not... It's about pain and how to deal with the pain... When the whole multiverse wants you and your loved ones dead. When you get caught in an insane plot and it can drive you insane... Then from the insanity, you search for the right answer. The story has a more complex take on the theme, with an extremely smart and omniscient antagonist. Well, it might not even be in the theme anymore. More like sarcasm. Moreover, the MC himself learns and evolves, mentally and physically. It's gruesome... The adventure is full of painful experiences... Loss and a lot of thinking, and more thinking... There seems to be no perfect answer... There are always unexpected twists Far from a romantic story. If you read you will know how complex the story is... I know that the earlier chapters were pretty average, even a bit boring, but if you manage to read up to chapter 130+, you will understand why this story is worth it!
Hello again... Finally found the time to edit the previous chapters. I've corrected most of the syntax and grammatical errors found so far, might take time to reflect. I'm halfway through the chapters. Will update you when I'm done.Cheers!!
As an author I give myself 3 stars for I feel there is always room to improve. if you don’t writing a review or commenting throughout the chapter, that’d be great. Thank you!!
Hi, Author here...I'm writing an honest review here. This is my third work, and to be honest, I wrote this novel as just a fun and relaxing debauched vampire novel because of my liking for MVS. There's nothing much to expect from it for the plot maniacs. It's written in the first person pov, so it might be a little weird when reading it. furthermore, the plot progression is super sluggish (remember, I wrote it for fun.)And lastly, I can guarantee you good mid-tier grammar that won't make your brain steam.
only got to chapter 3 but could not stand the horrible grammer.
I would not read it if I were you. instead, read one of the many other zombie novels on here.
Pff, Chapter 2, the "God of War System" ask him to bark to learn the langage spoken by the immortals.
If it's the kind of story where the cheat system tries to humiliate its host constantly to gain minor stuff, no thanks
It was a fun and enjoyable read! It made me laugh and imagine, like what if i was also there
