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If you like sports and an OP Mc with some romance tossed in give it a go. I read through everything on webnovel, then read through all of it in his patreon. Very good so far, can't wait for him to go pro.
at first i thought it was somewhat good...
but yea what can be expected from Chinese authors who have fk for brain and ideas...
so much shi t and bs ...
and no brain for anything...
totally a waste of time...
i am very disappointed i thought its was a check point system not a check-in system
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been 15 days and still counting... what's the update timings anyway?
Ok,I’m very excited for this.
The story is pretty good, I like it. The main character is great, he is willing to help others even though his condition is bad. That's a good first impression.
just like Prison Guards Only Knew That I Escaped After Reading My Novel
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This is very much a worth read if you ask me. It can be better if it fleshes out more the characters, and since it's a recent webnovel, I can't say for sure how stable the updates are, but so far it seems to do a darn good job.
And it can be better... But it has a 4.6/5 on my book, so, the writer here should be proud.
I agree with what the other reviewers wrote. It definitely isn't the best novel out there. And understand why there maybe exist people that wouldn't like it. But for me, it is the only novel in a long time that I feel I have actually enjoyed reading.
I Have read up to chapter 345 as of this review. And except for a couple of chapters between chapter 168 and 174(don't know exactly the reason just had to take a lite break from the story before returning to it), I would say that every chapter has brought me joy when reading.
In the beginning, the misunderstanding felt a little(very little) forced. But now a couple of dozen chapters in, the misunderstanding feels to happen naturally to me. And that is a massive improvement. It would be boring to read a story where the author had to constantly take away the Protagonist's brain cells, to create a misunderstanding.
Worldbuilding may not seem so great in the beginning, but as the story has moved along more and more details of an amazingly large world are revealed.
Writing Quality I would say is good, there might be a few grammatical errors now and then, but I can easily overlook them.
Story development is good, the plot moves along nicely, and at a steady pace. Some chapters now and then might be just fillers without plot, and just containing something ridiculous. But the author makes up for that with 3 chapters every day, many of them filled with plot development.
Character design is where this web novel shines I believe. As the author himself said, this Is a book about a character going through constant misunderstandings. And to make those misunderstandings happen without totally cutting away half of the Main and other characters' brain cells. Is amazing to me.
The only problem that I stumbled upon when reading the chapters was the author's unique writing style, but when I got used to it, it was that writing style that made me enjoy this book so much.
If you are hesitating whether to read this web novel or not, at least read the prologue and you will get an idea about the story, characters, and the author's writing style.
Lovely written.
Amazing plot.
great story and strong FL.
rollercoaster ride for emotions.