Lots of small translation errors, but still clearly legible. Good book over all, with decent story.
This novel is absolutely incredible. The depth of the world building makes it seem like a historical event. Every character has a brain and doesn't think like a plebian. The character also has to work for opportunities
Title: I Have An Impenetrable Fortress/我有一座无敌城Rating: N/AStatus: 420(Ongoing)Start Date: 2020/06Author other work: History’s Strongest Senior Brother, History’s Number 1 Founder, I’ve Possessed the Demon Sovereign’s Body.
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This book is superb... Story is quite good too... But review needs 140 letters................................. ??? It's killing lol...... Bye.....?
is this MTL or just extremly Bad written...................................................................................................
Too racist for my taste but will continue reading it for a bit it I drop it. It might change. Joking about 911 is not very nice either. It is Chinese author so no idea if they joke about it there often but for western readers it might be insulting.
the fact that the synopsis is not the start of the story but a far away event in the future makes the synopsis redundant. ppl read a book based on the synopsis because it sheds light on what to expect. But here ppl read the synopsis and then wonder why after all those chapters nothing happens. It's like this synopsis is from another book. very disappointing since I couldn't care less about the boring build up for his betrayal by his 'friends'. The worst part is that the story should only start after he dies and the endless chapters right now are filler chapters.
All it took was 4 chapters to see that story is just hot garbage. The only good points is that they are translating the novel very well and the editing is pretty okay as well. Now to the bad, we're do I start. First the author summarizes before MC travels back in time in 4 sentences. 4 ****ty sentences. No background, no characterization. Multiple pov shifts that can confuse a reader. No background to base our understanding of the MC and side characters after time shift. A broken game system that randomizes a new players ability and forces them to stay with those stats even if they remake a new character. That's a broken system only someone who knows nothing about how games work and was to lazy to research for 5 minutes.If I could, I would message the author directly and tell him to burn this story from existence.
What do you get when you combine a Xia MainCharacter cultivator with sherlock holmes and then mix in one of sergio leones Namless western film heroes.Well the answer is in this book and this book only!BADASS and COOL and not in a flashy hollywood way but a more elegant sneaky execution. I often compare it in my head to the old clint eastwood western were 2 characters would just stare at each other for 5min while music was going on then someone would say a single word then leave.This is a Chinese story with a very large cast of character VERY LARGE as in 40+ Chinese names.To me personally remembering a single Chinese name is similar to memorizing a 8 digit random number.But lest we dont have 10 characters with the same last name you can mostly remember them by their affiliation clan and role so it could be worse.
Classic instance of Webnovel using an actual translator for the first 60 or so chapters and then swapping to an edited MTL afterwards. In other words, regardless of the actual quality of the original work, the translated story becomes hot garbage that they have the gall to try and charge you for.