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qi in this fic is pretty much omnipotent and more unreasonable than Chinese fics. mc is pretty stupid and his reason to become strong is trash when dont even have a family. his reason to want have have a sect make even less sense. we can t forget how he help a girl and boy he know for less than a week and only caused trouble for him with this we can see what type of naive and stupid character he is and we can even use the excuse that is for character development because in his previous lives he already suffered in the hand of his family so if even after that he dont learn anything you can see how forced it is.
I've never wrote a review before but this one definitely deserves it. I have read 300+ chapters and just want to say what an absolute BANGER of a story. I was skeptical about it at first, and I didn't really like the info dumps that would happen constantly in the beginning. I took me a while to warm up to the story because of this. And I thought I was just going to drop the story because of how much I just didn't like the beginning.
BOY, WAS I WRONG!!
I can't get enough of this story. Seriously, if you are debating reading it, you need to. The writing grows so much from the beginning. The characters aren't just background but have actual personalities, which I find very rare nowadays with stories like these. There are a few arcs in here that I read in every story I find like this. Which is another reason I tend to drop these kinds of stories. But the writer does them so RIGHT I don't even care. Everything is so unique and out of the box. It's a nice breath of fresh air, this story.
I know this is a long review, but I just feel like this is a hidden gem on the app. I went ahead and started reading the other stories from this author and let's just say I found a new favorite.
A total waste of time.
The starting chapters were still interesting but later it follows the template:
OP MC goes in seclusion.
His sect almost destroyed.
Returns, gets underestimated, kills everyone opposing him and they start begging.
Repeat.
Just the same repetition and no progress in story since forever.
The author didn't even bother to research how a military school works... even though it seems to be very serious, most of the moments are pure reviews, even with the instructors. mc "grew up" in a military family but didn't even know the basic behavior to be followed... it is mentioned that he did more push-ups than his superior but he is not punished for it??? would this clearly be an act of showing arrogance, something extremely derided in the army (he would be punished with jail for showing himself above his superior even when they are trying to teach equality) and about the bedspreads being made in a specific way? I don't know in china (bunch of sick people) but in other places this is not necessary... what is necessary is for the person to maintain order in his "personal space". is it serious about them taking up arms so soon??? It takes months of psychological training to ensure that there is no psychopath (not all countries have this procedure, as physical and mental tests are required to enter a military school, at least in public schools)
This is better then all of the new trial reads that came out today except for My Post-Apocalyptic Shelter Levels Up Infinitely! which I enjoyed reading
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For a beast novel, this one is really good, much better than most of them. But it reminds me of KR novels. Is it a KR novel? heh.
Overall nothing super amazing but those who like taming beasts novels will probably like this one.
I've encountered gold... No, it was a diamond in the rough, a shiny piece of coal, after I reached my goal, finding the best story ever told.
If this book didn't make it to the top 25, I'll riot.
A powerful start with great image created. The plot grows so well throughout the chapters while the picture becomes clearer through those words written. Overall a great read
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Preety good, cant wait for them to become the vampire squad