A pretty great read about having a transmigrator friend while the main character is the one who didn't transmigrate. So far it's a nice light read with pretty women and world building.
Chill mc, good world building. No harem/loli/dark/depressing mc, bs as of yet so im hopefull. Just hope the author enjoys writeing this peice of art and isnt to obsessed over what others think or want from isekia. THIS IS THE AUTHORS ISEKIA.
Thank you author for your effort and this story. The story kept me going chapter after chapter. I have yet to finish hence picking it up to my reading list and dropping you my review.
Here are my comments
1. The whole story built up is commendable - truly well done from the start of how villin witnessed the death of the boy’s parents and taken in by the Silver to how he was trained until he enter the academy. The background to him attaining the different level of knowlege of a magus is well described
2. Creativity in plot and ability to draw the description of scenes allowing users to visualise clearly. As i read the chapters i am able to visualize each scene clearly. Eg. how the academy looks like, the classes, the time when Villin touch the crystal to his awakening, the corridor to the classes, the battle between Aiden and Amelia, the attack from Rolland to Villin - i could visualise it clearly as a result of the vivid description including the “test” set out by Pompei for his students how the fire ball went towards Kayley and Villin. Also the part where Villin fixed the crystal holder in class.
3. Content structure. It takes a lot to think through the content for such magical realm and world - this is done well and delivered effectively by the author from the use of wands, to web nodes awakening to wandless curses and spells. The classes and grades and lessons that are taught - i enjoy reading and deciphering these content.
4. Peak and story climax - i am reading from competitive student battle (aiden and amelia, Villin and his oponent on crease and cut) more and more exciting part from attacks to battles and surprises - this leaves readers stuck on the narrative turning one chapter to another - good manouvering on the plot leaving trails of excitement here and there.
Absolutely a must read for Harry Porter fans alike or magical fantasy - great built up of the entire world of magic. Look forward to read how Villin’s character will further evolve into and perhaps mega battle of the magical kingdom and forces to come. Good job author in putting in the effort for book. Keep up the good work!
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Typical “cultivation” novel even though it not called cultivation but it’s pretty much the same thing.
Despite having a special force past life and has been brought countless times but that’s all pretty much superficial as MC pretty much just power punch people.
Grappling , Choke holds, the various forms of locks and disarming techniques one would expect a military personnel from Earth is nowhere to be seen.
MC follows the typical routine of Cheat falling from the sky and MC using cheat and insaine comprehension to power his way through problems.
I had expected more when I saw Sepcial Force pastlife but unfortunately this seems to be another dud
Interesting!
I want to give this a chance ...
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I JUST AM IN LOVE WITH THE WORDPLAY. HOW DID YOU MANAGE?
Ngl, I feel like this is similar to the lord of the rings (in a way ofc.) and I love this book!
I think all the Lord Of The Rings fans will skim through the pages thoroughly and live it! I recommend this book to you if you love the "fantasy" Genre. Great Job by the author, Kudos to you for leaving us a masterpiece.
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Maaaan.. that is a good read.. i was laughing my butt off when my name showed there.. HAHAHAHA.. thank you for that chap rose chan.. this is a great novel.. very recomm to read!
I've read over a hundred chapters of this novel now. This is the type of monster MC you would either adore or hate. Why do I say this? This protagonist never truly becomes a dragon, at heart or soul, he will always be human. You could see this from each and every one of his interactions with sentient species; every time he inflicts harm upon them he would wallow in self-pity, guilt and philosophical debates (on the universe, life and death) for chapters on end. There's no growth to him as a dragon, whilst his power grows, his personality stays just as it was in chapter 1. Him living for years as a dragon doesn't change him a bit...which I find extremely disappointing.
Fantastic work by the author. I hope they will continue on this wonderful journey as a author. The only true issue I have is the fact that the story is too slow. Otherwise keep it up
Ah the start is really good. to be honest I loved the descriptions. you have a good writing style but I think you can work on your punctuation marks. I saw there are some unnecessary spaces between the punctuation marks. mostly in dailogues. Other than that it's a great read.