Every chapter leaves me wanting more I can’t wait iv read throu 3-4 times and love it
ATTENTION THIS NOVEL WAS CANCELD AT AROUND 1600 CHAPTERS.YOU WILL NEVER SEE AN END THINK ABOUT START READING. For everyone else i am super sorry I just found out today it broke my heart why isn't this mentiond on the fucking frontpage of the novel!
Writing Quality is good, there are little to no errors, some sentences were rough but still acceptable, how you describe something is a little bit lacking. Stability of Uodates is not consistent enough. Story Development is too fast paced. In Chapter 1 things happened too quickly, and there are some keypoints missing like, but since it's only starting, I guess it will be explained on the next chapters(If it will have) Character Design is acceptable. It lacks description on how the MC looks and what his personality is.World Background is also good, so no complaints there.
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This book is like an mmorpg but in real life with high stakes like death,in this story we follow a young talented kid named aren who goes in as a person in poverty but quickly excels in the new world he is in where he fights monsters and does quests to level up,in most mmo style games youll chose a class but in this everyone gets to choose from three paths that were chosen because they were suitable for the person every path is unique so you wont find two people with the same abilities i could go on but we would be getting into spoiler territory if I did so ill stop here thank you for reading.
The smooth diction and imagery kept me reading for longer than I expected! Quite informative and very descriptive world-building. Excellent work!
Wow, the second part grabbed me. The elevator romance is pretty good. I hope, Jenny's mother is gonna be fine. Good beginning, I say. I loved your last story, I am in love with my Ceo hubby and now waiting for this masterpiece.
Okay I need to know which story is supposed to continue Love’s story please
I so much love the plot. A great book. kudos to the author.
Team Threesome, I mean team I just can't decide. But I feel like she is not being fair to Luca.
Couldn’t get through the first chapter, grammar issues and author making description of characters confusing.
love the story!