TheUrbanKing
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I can predict that upcoming chapters will br interesting. I'm feared that upcoming generation will not become victim if it. ???.. So, be careful while reading it.
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Why 1 stars ?1) The translator use quasi for everything it's annoying ....2) Nothing is explained the author think that everyone know everything about this "perfect world" novels3) The translator or author use terms like blood, eyes, brain for a plant ...4) The system is a sign in system 5) The system make the mc learn everything he get instantly6) The mc is stupid7) a lot of others things ....
?????????????It’s funny and crazy mc x fatty sidekickCan’t go wrong with that combo ????Would ❤️ more chapters ? sixty isn’t enough
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My honest opinion and what I noticed, the story has minimal errors in terms of writing, it doesn't get in the way of reading, the release of a week can bother some, but due to the quality of the story, it's not possible to remove the merit just because of the capitols delay (I prefer quality over quantity). The narrative isn't bad, it's good. And about the story, volume 1 was pretty standard, nothing special that I remember, but volume 2, I thought it was very good, it was wonderful. But as everything that goes up will also have to come down, we arrived at volume 3 which is horrible and dark, not because of the writing but the course that the story took, and instead of the author changing the course he continued, if you don't believe me can you read the comments on the chapters of the third volume, do you want the reasons? The protagonist's behavior becomes irrational and a new character is as useful as Sakura.People can come and say that volume 3 is to develop the character, yes, but you don't develop a character by irritating your reader, quite the opposite, you have to develop it by making your reader feel empathy for the protagonist and not anger. But it's no use saying that the protagonist had his reasons, the reasons are not clear for several capitolos making their attitudes irrational, doing things that normal people wouldn't do.
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Can honestly not tell what ppl like about this story.The MC is quite stupid and everything that happened so far was connected to 'coincidences' that where obviously no coincidence. But the MC just doesn't care at all. He doesn't question anything, nothing is questioned, while everything is accepted.Possibly one of the worst character designs I've encountered so far.
Average story.Everything is Force. Relationship, Romance, Wedding. and we have Beta male. sigh.
So far i enjoy this but does anyone know the RAW name? 荒野探秘:神级扮演,开局麒麟纹身 does not seem to be the right one
