Idea on this novel very good.....idea about modern world and system....the MC from nerd become emperor.... i like this novel...i hope you can update this chapter everyday...and i hope too i can read this until the end of this chapter...thank you
I feel annoyed on MC in early chapters (I dont know if she will change for the better) she's so coward that I want to strangle her, so pathetic that I cant take it anymore.
I don't like this type of mc if u can't appreciate what's infront of u and go Chase something which is not with you at the moment then that's pathetic (according to me) so yeah it's not for me
The first half was a little difficult to get into, but the later half took on some charm. I have hopes for a more rich tale as the story continues.
I read 20 chapters, and it's boring, the MC is a soldier by all means (slave) he follows all orders from the system without asking, there is no intelligence collecting, the first thing he does is to accept a mission to hunt goblins and he acceptes being in another world very fast without even questioning it.
This is nothing but ranting about Africa not a story don’t waste your time
Nice story , I really enjoyed it . Just waiting for the next part.
It is really nice
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liking it so far
keep going!
interested to see more amelia chapters
i got to say the characters are great and the story captivating this point.
it is a good mix of serious and funny
Its a great concept for a story that is developed well. but big issue i have that makes it near impossible to keep going is the overused troupe of every conceiving him as weak. for me it just causes such frustration that I struggle to push through and continue.
I'll add this first and I'll wait when he's all grown up and ready to lead an army
Just a tip to the author. If you lock the chapters super early, no one will pay because no one will be invested in the characters. It also makes people not want to support your work because you make it seem like the only reason you write is for money.