This novel isn't for me. The MC is stupid with no common sense with a focus on getting revenge. Like every other paragraph MC will say something about revenge. Then every other paragraph MC will talk about why MC didn't get a army or some OP ability for free with no effort when in real life any normal person would not even think about get an army or whatever OP from the start an just be grateful with what they got. I really don't know how this got many 5 star reviews. Though the writing quality is great, while there are many chapters which are long enough to my liking. Still I can't read this anymore.
If you like video games and fantasy then this book is for you every chapter has you anticipating the next, and chapters uploading every so not a long wait.The writing style also helps me visualize that I’m there witnessing the story unfold. All in all I would definitely recommend.
So far I think that this book is so adorable. The characters are so cute and relatable at times. I love the storyline and I am really excited for what's to come. But don't rush author take as much time as you need. ❤️❤️
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"A red meteor falls down and hits the earth killing several hundred people in less than three hours ...but he wasn’t one of those peoples."- How small is this meteor to only kill hundreds of people in three hours?- If it's a big meteor, how far apart did people live to only suffer hundreds of casualties?- Or did the meteor hit a small village, isolated from the rest of the world?- Or is the world population so small, that a meteor hits the surface of the earth and ONLY kills several hundred?- Better question yet, what time period is this? If this is the modern or future era, I'm guessing people had time to evacuate and thus only several hundred people died. And therefore "he wasn't one of them" meaning he was one of those who escaped?"Shun Hyun was a fantasy RPG nerd who while playing his favorite game “KPOW”(King's power of war) his life became a literal game of war when his brother gets attached to a certain Game."- First of all, what does this have to do with the red meteor?- Are you writing two different stories?- Several hundred people died, "HE" wasn't one of them, but we don't know who "HE" refers to.- Is Shun Hyun related in any way to the male who did not get killed by the red meteor?- The two paragraphs have no relevance to each other.
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I love the beginning of this book, At first, I thought it was a fantasy but turns of to be a thrilling story about mental health and heartbreak that gets me all it my feels. great novel. love it
nice , Pls more
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