It's very good !! and also very funny!!!
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Good introduction, the meeting between the protagonist and mentor was humorously rendered. The plot develops quickly and there are endnotes to guide the reader so that they won't be too overwhelmed by the many new cultivation terms. Lots of action and some smooth moves were depicted too. (YY clap was pretty cool)
I’m Still not yet done reading but I have to say this story is amazing! With the top notch vocab and perfect writing I couldn’t Get enough. Well done author and keep on writing
good one !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!;;!;¡;!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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As a novel written for me i whole heartedly (shamelessly) give this a five star for all that you've done. Well jokes apart this novel really have a great potential and after reading it I'm legit curious on what's goin to happen next, is this the ******* Evie desired or destiny's play for something yet to be yearned for. Whatever it is I'm sure it's going to be a journey filled with action-packed, soul stirring excitement. Thanks for this wonderful gift evil（☆/＞u＜/）(*´∀｀).。o○
A great premise building immediate tension in the early chapters with the 3 months. This story explores the mind space of someone with limited time. The use of punctuation and flow of sentences could be improved with time and more practice, but the characters that are integral to stories like this are all built up nicely in the early stages.There may be a sense of over-description at times, though it only provides more details into both the environment and the mental of the main character.Speaking of the main character, the vibrant yet lightly erratic thoughts and conversation with self is something I actually related to way too hard with.....
Absolutely love this novel. I NEED MORE CHAPTERS please author ? ??Also don't drop this amazing piece of work and break our hearts. Thanks
Simply amazing! I am not a great fan of fanfiction novels but this one is stunningly well made. I really don't understand why this marvelous novel don't have more reviews. Come on readers! If you appreciate this work then do a review. Its only five minutes of your time and you would be encouraging the Author to continue to work hard!Extensive World Background descriptions and lore. Good Character Design; they feel lifelike and interesting. The story develop nicely and there is a balanced mix of action and discovery. The stability of updates is great and the writing quality its above the average novel.I totally recommend this novel to everyone who loves science fiction.
Anytime I refresh my Webnovel page, I've been seeing this book and I've always been thinking of meeting the author. I was so happy when I meet the author and he told me to give a review about his book. The novel is interesting. The story development and writing quality is on point. The synopsis caught my eye as well.I want to use this opportunity to thank the author and continue to update more and urge people to read this novel.PS: Will send you a gift soon ??.
I like the opening plot of the novel. It shows pain, love and determination. The novel altogether has a nice plot. Keeps the readers on their toes and making them itch to find out more. ??