I just finished reading the first chapter, and it was very interesting. Since there aren’t many chapters, I thought I’d write a review to recommend this work before enjoying the rest. For now, Noah, the protagonist, seems to be in a truly miserable state, and it’s a good start. I hope his condition improves as the chapters progress, but I doubt it. Anyway, good luck and brace yourself to read this work—sensitive souls, beware!
Came back to Webnovel after a while, only to see this author has dropped his previous book, and created this work of art. I love it, highly recommend it and can't wait for the larger plot to begin
Sorry author-sama I'm dropping this novel. I read up til chp 123 I believe, titled Red Dress. The concept of the story was what got me into reading it, but when he turns 10 it starts getting fast paced. After discovering the oil in the parched lands it was nothing but invention after inventions popping up real fast, wasn't even stretched out but more skimmed over, not what I wanted to read in a worldbuilding novel. Now its to the point in the story we see the female lead when he's 11 years old, and she's 10 (as I'm writing this, they have yet to meet). She's quite basically the same as him just not in the magical class but the warrior class. Which is ok for most stories but in this one it just feels forced, it doesn't seem natural (she's his arranged fiance by both parents). For me this was the last flag.Hope people still read this though these are just my preference and opions. The writing quality is good.Storytelling in the beginning is good; now not so much.Character description is good.World building is there....Overall the concept is good but, unfortunately for me it just hit and missed the mark.
I hope you continue this. Historical novels are some of my favorites and especially around the WWI/WW2 era.
please like this if it reached 100 chapters, so I'll start reading it, but in the first chapter, I can see it's potential
I'm enjoying this book xoxo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please keep on posting I'm up to date, let's support the author I just checked your Instagram @jae_05vy!!!!!!!!!!
I see a lot of potential here but I wish the author posted more frequently I just started reading and also just got the app. I look forward to where the story is heading though. I’ll continue reading good luck Toitxu!
I am trying to change the recommended algorithm to stop suggesting these. I do not have anything against this genre as a whole, but I want the recommendations to be something I am more likely to read and this just got caught in the crossfire
I actually really loved this entire new concept of a story and i will gladly read more!
nice work I actually love my book alot I hope to keep writing more thanks
Top class novel loved it ? it's so perfect everything about it is cool... Rimmer is badass teacher... Glenn is doting grandfather,syliva is loving mother
this author is no better than GhostyZ. He is only releasing this on patrion now. the only difference is that this author's book is actually good compared to the absolute horse dung that GhostyZ is releasing.