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I'm glad I decided to stick with the story, its enjoyable, gave me a few laughs at times but most importantly (for me) its captivating enough to keep me wanting to read more.
However, I would strongly advise the author to return to his first chapters (50 or so) and correct the spelling and grammatical errors. The latest chapters are around 95% without errors and fun to read but a new reader won't start from chapter 50 and the vast majority of them won't try to power through like others. So please, even if you have to dedicate 1 or 2 days to do this, revisit your first chapters and clean them up, it will help greatly.
kinda nice.. the author put in a lot of schemes/mysteries in it, at times it even felt a bit unnecessary and forceful.. other than that it was a good read
Hello guys,
Author here, I‘m sorry but I am going to have to give my book a 5 star
Will you continue this translation, Translator-san?
He just literally copy another story, even the sinopsis is exactly the same, try to be original man, it's a shame that you do that with the story of other people
You GUYS ARE MY SAVIOURS❤❤❤....the quLity of the translation is just SUPERB it doesnt make me wanna throw my phone out the window and call it a day, and bc i cant buy the novel yet i had to endure the ink burned translations for a long time. But am soooooo happy now that i found this. Thank you so much for taking up this project. I really hope you have the best of luck and just have a great life like you made mine.❤❤❤❤❤❤
MC will range from 1-5 years old throughout these chapters. I don't know if we'll have any more time skips but a little boy for an MC is a terrible choice. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------His birth family gave him a drop of Ancient Phoenix blood, sent him from the Highest God Realm to the Lowest Mortal Realm to hide away and grow stronger. ----------------------------------------------------------------His new adopted family is royalty. Mom is Empress Bing and dad is the King. His brother is the crown prince and sister is a genius. The Empress, King and Crown Prince were about to die when the void opened up, a baby came out and just by crying, he killed the pursuers--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------'xxxxxx----------After that, he was brought back to the kingdom. After his new parents discovered his abilities, Empress Bing faked her own death, took the boy and hide away in her clan, far away to protect the boy even more-------------------------'---------------------------------'------------------------------------------------------------------------------MC can talk at one. Just follow people around, annoyingly and has quite a bad mouth to everyone. He has an age ceremony at 5, awakens the fire attribute at the unknown rank. Of course, the Clan head says rank 1 to protect him........#----------------------------------- ---------------------#--##----------------------------##-#-MC has a future gf Nina from another clan. He was killed, but came back to life. He has to kill that evil Rose girl one day. Rose's older sister is Lily, a nice girl and was friends with MC. She didn't give up any info on Rose's whereabouts------------------------------------------------------------- ----------------#------------------------------------MC's family makes Lily his new slave for life, ssigning a soul pact. The BS part is that her cultivation jumps two realms instantly & she can also revive when she dies (if MC wants it). MC got no powerup. MC is still just 5, but a very arrogant person and very perverse, the exact opposite of what you usually see from a so called Phoenix Bloodline.
It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer.
Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.
except for the story being a bit slow everything's great
so far everything is good but the is one small problem maybe i did not notice it but the seem to be very little information about the cultivation path, i figure moral is warrior spiritual is a mage as for divine could it be with occupation plus a divine ability or something like that? maybe i am wrong. but other that that good book, cant wait for the next update.
This an amazing work but the updates are slow so I will give it a 4 star.............___-_+_+++++++++++_______++++++++_______+++++++++++____--------_+++____________++++++++++________-----------------
The writing quality is superb, and the story development was really on point. The characters are very interesting. Although the world and premise were quite full of cliches, it's still a good work. Very recommended to new readers out there.
