Story has huge potential but falls short because of a few reasons, mainly the progression of the story or rather lack there of. Story is so slow and filled with so much filler content that I end up skimming over most of the story and completely loses immersion
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The synopsis sounds good and the first chapter is very well written. Saved to read for future reading when more chapters are released. Can’t wait for this to be out!!!
Haven't read all the chapters yet but then again I pretty much fell in love with the story within the first five chaps or so anyway. Beautifully written, poignant and sweet. And an absolutely fantastic sense of humour!
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So far the author has done a good job with the book. The writing style and flow have no errors within them. While the book may be about cultivation which has become a somewhat bland category, the author offers a unique concept to this genre with this book. If done right it could end up as a great novel, and so far it has been good.
I’m honestly more surprised at myself for giving this book 5 stars, but it’s well deserved. And that’s saying something considering the fact that I rarely ever give 5 stars so easily. But anyways, on to the review.I’ve read only one book in this genre before and it wasn’t exactly similar, it was more like a game system type of book and I was thoroughly disappointed. Which is why I didn’t have any high expectations for this book but I was surprised, even from the first chapter! You had me hooked! How on earth did you do that?! I kept marveling at how perfect the grammar and world-building was and even though it was honestly a bit weird at first, seeing things from the eyes of a lizard-like-monster (I honestly hope it gets a name soon?) and seeing it hunts and grows, I expected to feel disgusted but all I felt was intrigue! The writing was seamless in the sense that every word connected perfectly with the next to portray a vivid image of your world to a reader—me. And it honestly was a page turner. Which is why I’ve added it to my library. I’m definitely going to keep reading. My only critique are a few punctuation errors here and there but that’s a minor thing every author deals with and I’m sure you can fix while you’re editing. Asides that, great job for introducing this “new” genre to me and leaving me with no disappointments!✨
It is good, but suffers from many odd mistakes, most of which, are about the mc. He comes to the past with 30 years of knowledge about the game, but barely remembers about how to kill an undead. The combat is worse though. He literally slams a cleaver into a guy's head and he doesnt die, resulting in the MC taking a hit and having to stab him in the heart. This was a fight with an untrained bandit. The fights are slow, resulting in paragraphs of a single fight with a struggling MC. Literally 30 years of combat experience and nothing to show for it besides above average skills, not even that good. It starts amazing, but progressively loses its features.
Its a pretty good story, if you can ignore the grammar that is , I don't want to spoil anything, so you guys should go ahead n read itIts a pretty good story, if you can ignore the grammar that is , I don't want to spoil anything, so you guys should go ahead n read it
This is a blatant copyright infringement, that is unacceptable. Not only did you not credit it, you shamelessly infringed on other works and fake it as your own.
I read this book up to chapter 37 and dropped it. I can no longer tolerate the fact that villains always manage to escape at the last moment. Also the reason that I dropped this book is the nerf mc in chapter 25