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I don't know what to write, I just simply love the story. And I also like the color blue, makes it even better. And the MCs name is Lulu, the same name as one of my favorite champions from League of Legends. If I love the book so much, what else can I give but 5 stars? Probably biased, but I couldn't care less. Every time I see the "1 book updated." and a red mark on the book in my library, I get excited.
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Hello and an honest review from me. One thing I wanted to point out is you may try to break down the long paragraphs and I suggest you to separate the dialogues so the readers could read your book comfortably?take your time to improve because you will get there one day✨
Ничего не понятно, нудно и скучно. Мир сложный, и его не раскрывают. Персонаж глупый. Второстепенные персонажи бесят...Положительных моментов я тут вообще толком не разглядел, за что и низкая оценка.
I enjoyed it well, the idea of having Alexander in your fictional world is quite interesting and fun. I somehow started it with a serious face and ended up laughing , and wanting to read more. Overall a very nice story. keep it up.
A novel with R-18 Content It is not that I have been warned Rather You Have my Attention ...........................................................................................................................................................
I wish more people saw this novel so I mark the 5 stars and why I like what I see at the momentThis is done with Google TranslatorYeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees
This novel has a good concept and plot (I think it might have). The only problems are the constant errors. Not grammatic errors but text error where some paragraphs don't make sense due to the wording. Author, I have tip that you can use while editing your chapters.First write your chapter and then wait at least 30 min before editing your chapter. Before you wait the chapter ia still fresh in your head so everything makes sense for you. But after you wait you see the things you could have done better. This is why editors are so great. But I assume you can't get an editor so just follow the tip above and you'll be most likely off better.Ps. I got this tip from a experienced author, but I was too lazy to implement this into my novel, although I probably will do it.
After a long year, Sakayanagi Arisu and Ayanokouji finally faces each other.What would happen in the upcoming special exam proposed by new director which ensures to drop two student from two losing class.The intensity of the exam is top rated as usual. Twists are common for this novel and I felt satisfied after completing it. HIGHLY RECOMMENDED!!
Balanced story with interesting developments
??????????????????? this is all that I have to say about this novel. I'd recommend that you read this. It's really good.
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