so i will first go through the two high scores but first I want to say something THE AUTHOR IS A FREAKING LIER AND A BIG TIME LIER AT THAT!
going back to the two high scores, he has stable updates, and even though the world background isn't original and highly limited it's not bad, though if I could I would have given it a 3.5, not a 4.
now for the writing quality, not saying that I'm a genius in writing or a stickler for grammar, I'm not. and I normally don't complain about non-proper grammatical sentences and I won't here, the problem is that the writing style is very awkward although it's still readable, the style seems like we are reading a list of things that the mc is doing rather than experiencing the moment with the mc. it was highly prominent a the start and lessened slightly later on and if the 2 things I'm gonna talk about weren't so bad the awkward writing style wouldn't have been a total dealbreaker.
story development, eh, actually I'm kinda torn. i like how the other characters aren't your stereotypical "you dare! you seem to have eyes but not have seen mount tai" but the main problem is with the MC, he I supposed to focus on cultivation so he specifically joins a sect that specializes in pill making yet the story bends backward to keep the mc as naive as possible, they literally teach him NOTHING LITERALLY NOTHING and that's the ACTUAL theme of the novel, total idiotic (yes e instead of an I was done on purpose) nativity.
he also gets everything without any effort.
character design, I would have actually given the character design a 2 or 3 if the mc was normal stupid, but this MC would not be accepted In the "special" class at school, they need the special version of the special version of the special class to nearly keep up with the mc's ritardedness.
forget 3 brain cells or no brain cells, I'm pretty sure this dude has a high negative IQ probably the most idiotic mc i have ever read in my entire life and i read the trial read novels with every cycle for the first free chapters...
the author tries to play it as if the mc is naive because he was working on a farm, but his idiocy reaches levels that this excuse can't justify, simple things like 5 min of research is something that he actively doesn't do, he actively digs himself holes and then he realises that he dug himself a hole so what does he do? he digs it even deeper, if you reach ch 48 you would know what i mean.
fine, the dude hasn't ever read or watched any fantasy/ cultivation anything but do a slight bit of research, my dude, if that's something you got interested in the first instinct is to read up on it or watch things on the thing you are interested on to gain as much info as you can.
going back to the author being a lier, in his comment he says that the mc is mostly ignorant for the most part for the first 10 chapters, but that's a lie, if anything as times go on it gets worst and worst as you can no longer excuse his ignorance.
I am thrilled to have followed this amazing story from its early days until the very end. It was the perfect escape from reality, and I eagerly awaited each chapter's release. The characters in this story were so well-written and developed that I felt like I really got to know them and cared about what happened to them. The plot was well-paced and kept me engaged throughout the entire story. I never felt like it was dragging or that things were moving too quickly.
The world-building was fantastic. The intricate details that the author included really helped me to visualize the setting and immerse myself in the story. This story had a great balance of humor and serious moments. I appreciated how the author was able to make me laugh one minute and then have me on the edge of my seat the next.
The cliffhangers were well-placed and kept me on the edge of my seat, but never felt like they were overdone. The ending was so satisfying and tied up all of the loose ends. I felt a sense of closure when I finished the last chapter, but also a sense of longing for more of this amazing story. Overall, I would highly recommend this story to anyone looking for a great read. Thank you to the author for taking me on an awesome journey.
I am actually in love with the writing style , very clear and an interesting plot which you shouldn't miss. I really enjoyed reading this work so it ends up in my collections . Looking forward to more chapters author.
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is it just me or is this just a poor rip off/fanfic of kings avatar .
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I love it, the plot, the interactions, and the comedy are all much better than most of what webnovel has.
I think there is something wron with the 5 Stars Reviews....
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Disappointing.
From the title I assumed that the MC would come to his own conclusions on cultivation and auxiliary jobs like arrays and alchemy , but it's just a system that spoon feeds him information and him carrying it out.
Even if it was him using an AI Chip like the one from Warlock in a Magus World, at least he would have to feed it data in order to get information, but this... he's just getting information stuffed into his brain with no effort.
keep up the good work sir!
i enjoy the novel.
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You must read this book! You absolutely must read this book! Why?
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This book has an interesting concept, both in terms of writing style and story development. You definitely won't be bored while reading this book and want more chapters.
Keep it up Ark!
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