a really great book the beginning was really attention grabbing as it went in dept on the prior situation, even if during the middle it seemed to draw out it was worth reading it all becaouse the main character was amazing as well as the other monsters who i found absolutely adorable
I am looking forward for this Novel's success.
I also feel that this Novel has deep conspiracy hidden inside it.
So, to unveil this mystery, we have to read this.
Hmmmmm, Lets go read this novel guys.
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This is a romantic misunderstanding love story. It has great promises. I can already see that there will be alot of followers for this story. It is a wonderful story. The MC clearly loves his wife while the wife has a mysterious past.
Thanks for sharing this wonderful and awesome story!:)
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Interessante o desenvolvimento dessa história, gostei bastante da introdução e de como as coisas funcionam. É básico e simples algo que cativa a leitura
Espero que consiga melhorar cada vez mais e torço pela vitória no concurso U.u
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Hey Author awesome work here! I like the story very much and the world is also made very nicely. But there are some points I would like to share-
- The change in MC's body made him very good at analyzing things. But when he encounters the odd changes in his body and the people following him, his mind goes blank. Like, he puts all the strange things happening to the back of his mind saying that he doesn't have much information. He should at least try and analyze what's happening and should come to some conclusions and theories as to what he might be and what's happening in his surroundings.
- And in the story it feels like as if the MC is being dragged around by some strange fate into various troublesome issues without his control. I mean, till now it's fine since he doesn't have 'Magic Sense' so can't tell if anything troublesome is happening ahead. But sometimes it feels as if he is being forcefully dragged in these situations which he solves with his brute strength and doesn't try to understand what might've caused them and thus creating an uproar in the circle of the upper echelons of the world (They'll send their spies and assassins and track the moves of MC without him knowing and solves various problems easily causing them shock). And he also lets everybody follow him saying he felt flustered and didn't know what to say so let them follow him. Please don't make this into one of those novels where wherever the MC goes he gets into trouble without knowing. At least let him understand the trouble and let him decide whether to act on it. I mean let him have his own will when joining troublesome situations. Also let him understand his own strength and don't think that he is very weak and all just like those Japanese Novels (just my opinion). He shouldn't just get dragged into the his minions/side characters/FMC's troubles every time. Just don't make this into a cliché where MC solves every trouble unknowingly and saves the world.
BTW if there's someone or something controlling his fate then it's OK.
All in all these were just my opinions and the book till now was very AWESOME!! KEEP IT IP!! [img=recommend]
I feel like would have enjoyed it more if it was written like a normal Novel and not something from the 80's, why exactly are you trying to complicate simple sentences with huge grammars, it's so off putting and annoying, couldn't focus at all.
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Another cool type of sci-fi. Hope the MC will find his way to overcome his ordeal somehow. I truly can't wait for its continuation. Hope it'll continue and quench my curiosity about what will happen next.
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