Haha gotta say I enjoyed reading all the chapters available so far. Writing is great and entertaining. Although I often am not the biggest fan of romance, but if it done correctly I am all for it. Here, author might be going for it, but we shall see and find out. Good luck!
I've really enjoyed this read. I'm gay, it's gay, I approve.
Too messy, after 50 chapters or so, the names, cultivation level, lifespan, etc is so random.
This story is really good and each new chapter I read makes me look forward to the next one, moreover rate of publication is high while giving quality chapters. Thank you for sharing your history with us.
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I’m fully aware that as the story only has 18 reviews as of now, I’m bombing the review score. But at the same time, this story deserves nowhere near as much support as it seems to be getting. The concept is great and I love it, but the execution the author used is terrible. And yes, it’s the author’s first time writing but... that’s not an excuse to just ignore what readers are trying to say. In fact. The author is blatantly disregarding all the comments about the typos and spelling mistakes, or the story’s absolutely terrible grammar. Which, by the way, the story is littered with. Sorry, but I can’t support this train wreck. But here’s a promise, I’ll come back and fully support the novel of the author gets the story back together. Likely quite a few chapters need fully rewriting to make the grammar readable but trust me author... it’s well worth the cost. Props to the author for choosing to write, though.
The story is ok but I read ahead in the raws and - not joking in the slightest - genuinely hilarious dialogue even with MTL. I highly suggest you vote for this.
i like this novel mainly because i wanna be the mc lmaoooo. personally, i think its worthwhile your time, hope it gets pickedd..............
this story started out sorta ok but then it deteriorated into a mishmash of randomness thrown into a sort of followable story. like ADHD meets writing meets stupidity
Some stuffs I don't like but it's good
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Get a editer it seems like it was run through Google translate. The words are rather jumbled and attempt at simile and metaphors are tricky to decipher. Gender words should be considered as reference to a species. Also the word larva was mistaken as ladies.
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