Read 60 ish chapters. This feels like an almost word for word copy of "I Became the Rich Second-Generation Villain". The setting is the same, started at a school, the girl, the school punishment, the girl leaving with the MC etc. Even the MC is a secret master, people wanting to save him. Helping a poor girl. Father injury. Just a few words and names changed up. don't tell another MC is going to be a person who is extremely good at arts or something.
It was good while it lasted. Now quarter of the chapters are locked. I know why you locked so many chapters but my gosh. You guys are killing me
this is abhorrent. disgusting. vile. bad. evil and much more whoever made this novel should be rotting in prison. any one who likes this pedophilia should not be living in a immediate 200 miles of a child.
The novel is very beautiful
Please finish it.
Is a really good novel with a different vibe than other cultivation novels the author is Also a pretty nice dude I know him from the discord channel that he has opened and would recommend to those that like the novel to join us I have the role of direct disciple there with the name "Intil_O".
my brother in Christ why did you stop this, this was very entertaining read and was honestly getting addicted to this until I hit the last chapter
Honestly I hope the author comes back to this and atleast make 50 chapters at minimum before stopping
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wanna start it but hmm updated 13 days ago did you drop it? ty :))
I find the story very interesting, even though I have no idea where it is going lol. I like the background and the multiple POV as it makes me see things from everyone's perspective. Skylar seems very interesting, and I can't wait to learn about his past. I recommend you put in an axillary chapter explaining a few things so new readers won't be lost.
The story has improved every time, although there are still errors in grammar, at least it has improved a bit. Thank you editors!
The background info is too much. Most of it gets straight pass by my head. I would suggest to add background info only when needed. Do not preset it.
For example, when MC comes across a beast then please do describe it. Don't give all classification of different beasts beforehand.
Please...
The story's world-building is good, the grammar is acceptable since it's not the author's first language and I imagine this story has good potential as the author is definitely dedicated.