Haaayeeeee ???
Can I get enough of this story ever
The bond which twin shares is exceptional
Just amazing story ? ? ?
worth reading..
it so confusing
Your second chapter starts getting very confusing. Why is the main character having to do certain things like check in. Are both cities next to each other? The descriptions are great and the storyline sounds promising, I'm getting lost reading on what exactly is happening.
excellent stortline, very well written. keeps you engaged from beginning to end. I couldn't put it down.
when is your next book out?
I began the novel due to its popularity, and after reading the first volume, I found it intriguing. However, as I progressed, the quality declined. The only positive aspect I could recall from after the first volume was the fight with Noito, which seemed to be a highlight.
The second dungeon was decent, but subsequent events portrayed the main character, Hajime, as almost invincible, as he always seemed to have anticipated every challenge. The encounters where he faced adversity felt forced, like when he narrowly escaped death against Freed and his dragon the first time, but in their next encounter, Yue easily defeated them without any mention of Hajime's preparations.
Another example was a battle where their followers fought seemingly divine angels, who temporarily boosted their stats three times. Despite this advantage, the heroes managed to prevail and defeat most opponents. This inconsistency didn't make logical sense, given the angels' enhanced abilities and the prolonged fight.
In summary, I wouldn't recommend this novel, as it lost its appeal for me as the story progressed.
This novel is truly remarkable. I adore the female lead's character, as she exhibits incredible intelligence and strength. The fact that she explores this world using her own physical body, without the device of reincarnation or transmigration, makes it all the more captivating for me.
I'm unsure about my feelings towards this novel. Initially, I read comments suggesting a happy ending, but upon reflection, does it truly qualify? It left me conflicted... personally, I wasn't completely satisfied with the conclusion, yet the plot captivated me for an entire day. The ending feels somewhat ambiguous, though there were a few translation parts that were confusing. Despite that, the story was generally easy to follow. Kudos to the translators for their hard work – your dedication is appreciated! ??✨
In summary, I would rate this work a solid 5/5. Highly recommended! The story is captivating from the beginning to the end, despite having some horror elements, the comedy balances it well, ensuring it's not overly frightening. The plot is well-paced, neither too short nor too lengthy, and the ending satisfactorily ties up most loose ends (though I missed out on the extra chapter).
Characters are diverse and engaging, including both protagonists and antagonists. Relationships and dynamics are portrayed effectively, even if some minor characters could have had more significant roles. The character development is commendable, with recurring appearances throughout the story.
The translation by Inky Dragon Translations earns a perfect score for me. Though there are occasional errors, the error rate is minimal considering the text volume. It's evident that the translator put considerable effort into providing context, explaining names, and localizing language to enhance the storytelling experience. The inclusion of visuals and formatting adjustments further immerse readers in the narrative.
Overall, I greatly appreciate Inky Dragon Translations for bringing this novel to English readers. It's a gem worth picking up, and I wholeheartedly recommend giving it a read.
i’ll take your word for it and continue reading i’ll let you know if i like it
Wtf lololol