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Good, this is really really good, I couldn't stop reading from the first chapter. Love the pace of the story and how you describe in such detail the world's background.
I will keep your work in my library, waiting for more.
Great Job author! Definitely recommended [img=recommend]
A captivating story full of rage, energy and intrigue. Easy to read. The text block is smooth, everything is clear. The only mistake that caught my eye after reading the 7 chapters was the incomplete title page. No title, no author. In general, it’s very serious work. Which proves the number of readings.
Author, good work, quality content.
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I really like this plot but, I myself knew that it would at the very least take hundreds or at most a thousand of chapters before he will get to be called by those title of hid like "Apex Cultivator".
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Translation? Mediocre. Story? Mediocre. Anyway I don't know if it's intentional but the Qian Dynasty in this webnovel here seems to be a terrible place to live in and I don't like how the Mc is just content to live in that. In the end I do not recommend reading further. Only good point is that the Mc doesn't have a westernized name. I am becoming way too bitter for this.
I'm not a fan of martial art/spirits, but I am a fan now! I really like how you did with the story. Everything feels new to me, but you had a knack for describing things in the novel! Keep up the good work!
This has definitely become one of my favourite novels to read after becoming tired of most of the novels these days. The grammar is not the best, but it is definitely readable and the story is worth it. If you find factory stuff satisfying and you like to see soldiers in a cultivation world with guns, try this novel out. It isn't rushed and you will see the impact of our modern ideologies in another world.A tip I would give after reading up to chapter 25 would be to view capital letters as the start of new sentences. Also, sometimes lists are missing commas. Other than that, read with imagination and creativity. There is no romance or weird behaviour so far, it's pure content.Would recommend.
Awesome. I can't wait to see want happened next to the two. Great storyline author. Waiting for more updates from you author. Keep going ??
I really like this story, in terms of background storytelling and imagination, a fantasy world that is very epic, challenging and very exciting, it's a shame if you miss it!
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Wish-fulfillment catering to children, and teenagers. Or in other words, a power fantasy about how being popular in life is all you need to be happy.
Your sense of self-worth can only grow with the approval of random strangers! Don't forget - the real world is useless, what matters is the online world!
Please note the sarcasm. This novel is ridiculous. The very concept of it is disgusting.
