By chapter 12, MC saves a young master. The young master was wearing a disguise, turns out he is a she. She wakes up, punches MC in face since she is naked on top.... MC explains he saved her life. She thanks him. They end up flirting, hugging, kissing and she says "Be gentle" while MC gives her the meat
it's strong start with good story line with a simple main character background
I love it looking forward for story and regular updates
Cerita ini sangat menarik, tetapi pengembangan konflik antara tokoh utama dan tokoh perempuan kurang menarik. Buatlah konflik yang sedikit lebih rumit untuk mendapatkan seorang perempuan untuk tokoh utama, agar cerita dapat berkembang lebih menarik. Thanks for the story.
this is a Korean drama without Korean actors.
so full of twists and inconsistency, I had enough.
good luck.
The chapters are in the process of being a edited by an editor so the mistakes in the first chapter's should soon disappear and make the book more readable. This will also be the reason for when you will be seeing a lot of coments at the end of chapter but a little to no paragraph comments since the whole chapter is being replace by a new one in its place causing the paragraph comments to dissapear.Thanks.
Cant recommend, its a Machine Translated tradh with little proof reading.Sorry, but this book is just a mtl with very little proof reading. Skill names change from line to line, stat numbers are incosistent or false ( main char had 7 int at the start got 30 more and it became 33. meaning the protag became even more stupid. )This is also a translation work from a qidian employee directly. At the beginning they still did a good job ( even if they destroyed competition in the fan translation market who did decend translations ) but lately they started using mtl more and more and the proof reading becomes worse and worse. I think they found out that some readers are stupid enough to pay for this unworthy translations. They are destroying these books for the international market forever without care for long term profit and only see the shot term earnings.I hope qidian will someday learn there lessons.
Oh My God, this is amazing, it's so realistic and exciting. I need more chapters, finished the 299 chaps in like 2 days, I rlly loved this, my whole attention for 2 full days was devoted to this and I need more!!!
Its good and it starts out feeling like it will have good pacing too but it becomes really slow paced story after about 30-40 chapters.
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424 supporting and 600k view, still not get chosen wow lol
it's a good read with daily updates and so far (chapter 116) characters are pretty well developed and the same can be said about the world background