i wish i could give "ZERO" stars. its not original. its a complete copy of the novel sharing shame name by the author "flaying de lazy cat".
it's an interesting story so far, pretty decent, chaps are a bit short tho, and seeing caps lock on all ur titles along in the author note hurts my brain istg
While I am reading this story,I fully entered into that story . The story was very interesting and thriller. I am very eager to study the next part of this story.
Good good good good good good good good food good good good food good goood good but update more....Really great I mean Goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooddddddddddddd
What can I say I'm a sucker for OP creature OC
Keep up the good update schedule
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*Cocked Gun* Hey Author, I need more updates or I will surely do something real bad. This novel is something with a blend of Adventure and Mystery. Loved it!!!
I don't like how mc gets NTR left and right,
if don't like the story where mc gets NTR it's not for you.
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I like it! The synopsis is interesting and it really made me want to read it. The first chapter shows what is happening or what the story entails. I'm still annoyed at the guy who fudging killed him. Great story though! I can't see any grammatical errors. It's smooth to read and it's fun to read too!Great job author!
Author-san-special-five-star-review!!! 1st version! I want to say it’s the first and only version, but knowing me, I’m prob gonna have to change this one day or another. Anyhow, let’s get to the review. STORY DEVELOPMENT – ToneOkay, this time it’s really gonna be a grim-dark story. I know I said the same last time and it turned out to be a feel-good slice-of-life, but trust me, alright. Just read like, the first 2 chaps and you’ll see it. Obviously, it’s not gonna be all gloom and depression. Slice-of-life will happen (since I love it), there will be comedy, romance, action, adventure, and all that good stuff. One more thing I wanna add here is the mysteriousness of the novel. I know it sounds kinda pretentious coming from me, calling my novel mysterious and all, but what I mean is just that I’ll try my best to withhold certain info from the readers.The reason for this is that I ****ed up a lot on SotNeW, by explaining every detail of the story as they appeared. Not cool.STORY DEVELOPMENT – Pacing.Things will happen faster this time around. Last time, whenever I wrote a scene, almost always, I would stick it into the story without deleting it (even though they were completely filler), but I’ll do it this time. Scenes will die, since I’m gonna have a proper stockpile this time around. And also, Author-san ascended, and like, learned how to skip useless parts in scenes. Very epic.STORY DEVELOPMENT – Side Stories.Different POVs and other stories will appear more. I’ll just say that. Also, depending on stuff, I might rewrite previously written scenes in the POV of a different character. I’ll try to make this clearer as we go about the story.Also, remastered Layla story incoming, pog. And yes, I’ll take a part from that and chuck it into the synopsis. He-he-he.CHARACTERS – MCMC will have an interesting character arc this time around, how about that? CHARACTERS – Side charas.I have plans to tie more side charas to MC’s story, in a more intimate and non-conversational way. And t r y … to develop their arcs in that manner, but I’m not sure how that’ll work out in reality. It'll probably be okay. Oh yeah, also, Romance~~WORLD-BUILDINGI mentioned this before, but I’m gonna try to withhold certain information, so their reveal will be more satisfying later on. I know the older readers will have knowledge about some details due to the rewrite, but I’ll try my best to keep things spicy for everyone.MAGIC SYSTEMThe fundamentals for this will not change, but I’m gonna add a lot of quality-of-life changes to the usage of Worlds. It will still be a Hard Magic System , but I’m gonna try and add a Softer side to it as well. SETTING and WORLD BACKGROUNDSome things will be uncheatable, but they’ll be much rarer compared to the previous version. This will add a sense of risk to actions and give birth to more interesting choices. MISCELLANEOUS STUFF-No harem planned.-There will be cliches, but I’ll give them my own touch. I think you'll like it a lot.-----Alright, I think that's it. Ask me if you have any questions ;3
A good premise. Need more chappies! ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????❤❤❤