I gonna be honest here after reading first 200 chapters. The forced tragedy for a guy who on earth before his reincarnation was top tier in a mafia family but somehow and some weird reason he decided not to use that prior knowledge to get his situation better from the beginning? This is honestly dumb as f*** development not sure how this is ranked as high on the story dev side of things when it's all forced bs
honestly I've been searching for something like this one it's just a light hearted adventure type I wish always stays like this and let us enjoy the slow but awesome world building and storytelling it's like your really with them on their adventure it's really good and realistic of a world that they are just having fun honestly you wouldn't even care about being op mc or such thing even though he is but more like having a new life of adventure fantasy and story that doesn't need like big even happening that they have to do save the would it's more like chilling adventures that's just perfect if your looking for something like this and most importantly the details on the stuff they do . the only thing I wish is stays like this and doesn't just go with stereo typical villains like the "spoiler" here like the demons that are building up .and maybe a little more details of follow ups with they're system and leveling sometimes and some skills that get forgotten and that's the only weakness in my opinion to be honest but overall it's really a must read
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The story and characters develop in a fun and interesting way that makes it hard to put down. If you are like me you’ll end up reading chapter after chapter not even realizing you have read more than one as they flow together seamlessly.
G'day mates! The idea of your loved ones going missing randomly, never to be seen again... would be quite sorrowful. But what if you later found out that it wasn't due to them wandering off and getting lost in the woods, but instead... they were kidnapped and sold to a mech army in the future.I am very excited to see where this goes in the future, definitely worth reading and adding to collections!
Hi, I'm the author. I'm just gonna shamelessly rate this book above 5 stars. If you are looking for a cold MC that you can connect to, this is the book for you. Also, feel free to comment about your thoughts on each chapter.
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OK my first review here, normally i don't review at all but this book broke the mold for me so far. i love the idea behind it, the MC seem well fleshed out for current story progress and im Really hoping that this book continue's for at least a 1000 chapters :D To the author i can only say Good Job i hope you keep em coming, you got at least one more Fan.
its a very well writen book, the author have a lot of potential and i cant wait to know the next part, i have high hope for this book, if anyone wanted a great book then this definitely is what they need
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You have a plot and direction for your story, author. I salute you for that. You also have a good grasp of how to play with your MC's emotions and ideas. The story is engaging. Your grammar still has room for improvement but you don't have to worry much about it because your sentences flow naturally and it's still easy to follow. I think what you should prioritize for now is the stability of updates and more on world background. Also, work on the punctuations and capitalization. Also break down your paragraphs into more paragraphs. I suggest you always leave the quoted conversations as a line/paragraph of itself. In other words, work on making your paragraphs easier on the eyes. Honestly, some chapters look more like a wall of text to me. And I hate to say this, but many readers dislike wall of texts. XDUhh, no worries. This is all just the technical side. When it comes to content, you're already on the right direction. :-)
I completed reading all the chapters within a hour and i enjoyed it????????????lots of love for the author ❤❤❤❤❤and yeah can't wait for the author to update another chapter