to much non sense, this novel is realy cheap rip off of game descandent, he start to much trouble for himself out of nothing, when everthing can be solved by peacefull way. and this novel really lack of common sense, the just started yet he directly sell expensive equipment and skill before people di any mission. the author just to lazy to make what diffrence betwen game curency with world currency, 1 gold = 1$. like where silver and bronze coin?
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how many arcs will this have I just started reading it and it feels like it'll be long but I don't know lol
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A very interesting story with great characters and interesting settings. The pacing is great and the sentences flow well, conveying the story and the characters aptly. I especially enjoyed the system mechanics and the level grinds and the calm and collected, yet funny MC is always a joy to read. The writing in the earlier chapters could surely use some work, but I took a look at the more recent ones and can say that the quality surely improves! Amazing work!
I love the story's world background and the storyline. The author should however try to work on the sentence structure and writing quality in general. Otherwise, you guys should give the book a try.
Here is my insight of this novel of mine. Okay the story follows to talented engineers from the modern world that got whisked into another world after getting hit by a truck. They woke up in an unknown feeble body living in the parallel late nineteenth century america. They are forced to survive by working like everybody else and few years later, they started their own company. Now the reason why I wrote this novel is because I was looking for this type of story. But there was no luck, there are some but it was staged in medieval fantasy, realistic medieval otome or villainess, or even ancient times. Most often, the characters are reborn into noble family, sometimes it's more of a kingdom building. Those are in the mainstream and I wanted new ones. And then there is this anime called Ascendance of Bookworm. If you don't know about it, it's about a nerd girl teenager who transmigrated as Myne. She used her modern knowledge to get ahead of others like inventing papers, hairclips, soaps and shampoo. And there I wondered, what if instead of medieval age, what if I set the story, two or three century ahead? Like late nineteenth century? A period of rapid industrialization, scientific advancement, and social change. Why settle for papers when you can build the first automobiles, a more cooler guns, aircrafts, electricity, and oil and gas. And make it a business novel where they used their modern knowledge to churn out modern technology that is decades ahead of others. And the result is this. Well, this novel is a more of a slice-of-life, I think you know what that means. There will be antagonist, challenges, and the characters resolved it, and then there will be another. So expect that this novel will last hundred more chapters. Expect a lot of timeskips. Well, they are dealing with technology here that can't be built in a day or a week, so instead of me describing their everyday life on every chapter, why not do a timeskip right?Romance? Hmm...there will be romance for each of our main characters and their own moments but they are not the focus, but you'll see me often teasing it. About the setting. Well, it's a parallel late nineteenth century so expect some similarities to our own world history. While this novel may feature a character with the same name as a famous historical figure, please be advised that any similarities in personality, behavior, or appearance are purely coincidental and should not be taken as an accurate representation of the real person. And that's it, I hope you enjoy this novel. If you are reader of RIP, you'll enjoy this. Think of it as the main characters building the Imperial Dynamic Systems.
Honestly, it's not the cookie cutter plot that's the problem... it's how it's so forced... he knows he needs to be low key.... but chooses not to be... doesn't leave the sect... and leaves such easy clues I don't get why he's not killed already.... he's reincarnated but doesn't properly take advantage of that to the point that the reincarnation is pointless... it's like the author just wanted this system and then forces the cookie cutter plot.... and how bad is it you ask???Author has him cleans his marrows with a pill while already having a cleansing system....
I lik3 it so far I'm willing to keep reading if it comes out trial reads. told my bro about he says it sounds cool so he may read it as well.
Trash.......................................
This is at best a average novel but the writer keeps it interesting and not boring like the other basketball novel.
Overall it's readable and Grammer is ok but I'm hooked