Such a good novel, sadly I can’t afford it anymore
Wow, that's really amazing. It's the first time I've really come across this kind of farming novel. The novel about cultivation relates to the law that knowledge is power. Also the hero reminds me of Leylin's character from the novel Magus The Wizard's World, a hero eager to know. My only wish or advice if this is true is to make the viewer see the progress of the hero step by step, do not jump at the time, I know that this is difficult, but try as much as you can, because this way you will succeed in attracting the audience also. Try to make the cultivation system deep in the sense that there are many requirements for progress In cultivation, strict conditions and provisions do not make progress just absorbing qi, and the last thing that I hope to focus on is to make between one level and another great difference as big as heaven and earth, like even if they turn 1000 cultivators collecting qi fighting someone at the level of the institution, he will defeat them without Any fatigue or injury will make the narration strict rules. The viewer will also be excited when the hero reaches a new great level because the viewer will really feel that there is a difference between the levels. Also try to make farmers rare, mysterious and revered things that have their own rules. Give each level a right of respect, such as the level of the foundation institution. Make in Taif the number of people who reached this level approximately 100 people. This will give the viewer really the difficulty of farming, and every time the hero rises a new level was People like him are less. In short, give each level its status. Do not make everything fodder for the defender. If you want advice, do not care about it. Did you not like it, which is to add something like a chip from the novels of Magus, the Wizard's World, and similar novels that will be really interesting? Imagine with me "The farmer who seeks knowledge in a world "Mysterious and Dark Cultivation" and that's all I have. I hope it helped you. You are free to reject all my advice. Thank you for your time.
I'm not much of a system reader because I get so confused. But as I'm reading the chapters of this novel, I can't help but be amazed. The writing is excellent; very descriptive, and precise. I went on reading without even knowing how far I've gone. The plot is interesting; I can't wait to see what will happen in the future chapters. Good job to the author and all the best!
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Lol, I like how the author put in a disclaimer that he will make fun of dogs and cats.
You can tell the humour is good from that alone, not to mention 'Luigi's Pizzaria'.
Pfft. Imagine, a guy walks up to a mafiaso and shouts, "It's a me! Luigi!"
Then jumps on his head and kills him. But here he doesn't eat the magic mushrooms (drugs) and prevents others from eating them.
Great concept, great writing. Keep it up.
I have through most of the chapters and I have no words to describe how wonderful this novel has been to read. It is one of the best I have ever read. Nice work, Author. Keep it up :D
dumb mc, im mad. I really like plant mcs but his novel sucks. the plant might aswell not be the mc, the deer is always in the front seat. novel promised plant mc, but we got an animal instead
Super rushed with no plot whatsoever , it feels like reading a roughly skimmed journal
There is no connection to the characters or the world,
It feels like reading a bunch of random words and it makes no sense.
In conclusion I DO NOT RECOMMEND.
The writing skill is impressive, how the author explains the fight scenes is admirable for as the reader you can see the image depicted by the author. And I love the whole fight arena sequel it reminds me of "The hunger games". It's a unique book to read and there are few books like this one that draws the reader into the Authors world. Keep on writing, loving it so far.
Other reviewers are expressing concerns about Mad Snail's update pace. I can't speak to that, but the story itself is a hodge-podge of half-formed ideas. It reads like the author had a bunch of ideas for a story in a VRMMO and just sort of sprinkled them onto a template without considering how they interacted with each other or how to give any one idea enough focus to breathe.
I really love it I thought that it is a really good concept and the quality’s really good❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Wow, this one is cool. I got hooked up as I read the synopsis. I really love reading mystery and thriller. I hope we can get the one that we expect from this book. Guys, I recommend this story for those who really love reading mystery, crimes and thriller. I hope you could update more chapters so we'll able to know the main problem in this story. Good job Kid!