I’ve already read like 3 of this authors works and they were all amazing. I have no doubt this is gonna be good even though it still has a small amount of chapters. Plus I’m a sucker for apocalyptic worlds with the main character having a space/superpowers. So If you like those stories I would recommend this.?
overall pretty good, can't even think of any constructive criticism..................................................................................
???? no plot armour/plot holes, realistic characters, cleanly written, smooth progress which makes the story naturally pleasing and comfortable read, and mostly great and well made? characters with their natural development which makes you attach, sympathise and understanding towards their progress, action, death etc....
老实说，这很棒，是网络小说应用程序中较好的小说之一。故事写得很好，也很有趣，就像我一直想雕刻的那样。祝这本小说好运，我希望它能成为畅销书。
I enjoyed this story very much but most might not since it takes a long before the fantasy part of the story will start and since English is not the author's first language there might be mistakes but I still enjoy and I hope the author continues to write ??
So here's my review!Strengths:- Engaging post-apocalyptic world with OGI powers and hierarchy.- Action-packed scenes that keep readers hooked.- Superhuman abilities of the protagonist add excitement.- Mysterious characters like Mr. Mink create intrigue.- Flashback scene provides insight and hints at a larger story.Areas for improvement:- Abrupt transitions between scenes.- Pacing issues in certain areas.- Dialogue could be improved for better engagement.Overall, the story has potential with its engaging world, thrilling action, and mysterious characters. However, addressing the issues of transitions, clarity, pacing, and dialogue would enhance the reading experience. With these improvements, the story could become even more captivating and leave readers eagerly anticipating future chapters.
Super interested to see where this goes! So far, it's been great; the author seems to know his world-building. I can't wait to see how the main character develops his relationships with other members of the cast.
author I hope you will update this novel soon and also the Bakugan novel as it is getting very interesting ??????? also reference for a good concept is digimon??
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Bendy & The Twisted Ritual (Bending The Rules Of Reality) ((Preview?))
"Mr. Kugimiya, a call from Takeshi." We all turned to the man who spoke, he was holding a phone and bowed down that we couldn't even see his face anymore. Mr. Kugimiya's lips rose. The stoic man was gone... Who is Takeshi?