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Plot: The engagement of the plot is too good. This is the story of multiple genres and the writer focus on every genre equally. Mystery: This part is well-written. While the mystery wan not so unique but the of solving mystery is too good. I like the writer's unique style of solving mystery. He properly used a laid back character like Sakib.Romance: The most strong point of this novel is the slow burn romance. Obviously, that romance feels refreshing while reading the mystery. Character: I like sakib character. He is the main charmed of the novel. Othar character is also written good.World background: In this part people feel confused. But for me, it’s okay.Overall restless youth is promising. I like it. I think people who read mystery, comedy, slice of life etc. Then, you can try this novel.
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This is an amazing book. Good job author.
The start of this novel is interesting which hooked me in but it might be considered slow for some people...but for me it's fine. The system/simulator is an interesting take on the rpg genre...I know many books who had started but not able to execute the premise well...but till now the book is going OK so far by keeping everything in balance.Hope the author continues writing the story and not give up.
author overall, I noticed some mistakes in your novel, but even then it's really good. I've noticed some spelling mistakes here and there, although the main problem I've had with this book is that it goes over the top when it comes to explaining what happens inside the classes, even though it could easily be explained in a couple of sentences at most. when it comes to that it feels like the author is trying to find something to talk about but doesn't have the imagination to do so. even then, pretty good novel, I would suggest reading for at least the first Arc (16 chapters)
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Reviewing after reading a few chapters...This novel really packs a punch. It does not hold back with its bluntness, and it is highly informative to boot. The personality of the author shows in his writing, and I personally believe we can be friends irl with his perspective. I like the historical references, and I like how the narration points out the absurdity of some, or most, of them. The storytelling feeds you something, and you can easily digest it no problem. I admit, I'm also a sucker for the comedic elements of this novel. Well done, Mr. Author.
It's good . Overall interesting thing to read for now, not all that much else I can really say?
I absolutely love it like the last person said I hope it doesn't get dropped! novels like this are extremely hard to find. mixing modern technology, art, entertainment, and ideas to a fantasy world of swords and sorcery is exactly the kind of novel that I've been searching for. So far, it's a true slice of life that can bring a smile to the face that doesn't really have any fighting and a world that's mostly peaceful. I hope you will include other races as well. please don't make us wait for too long for more chapters!!!
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