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The story is captivating. I am interested in how the story will continue
Author here.This is a startup.if you happen to stumble upon this pls make yourself visible and don't be stingy with your votes and your comments this book needs it.thanks amigos.
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
Hey author?? I haven’t read your novel yet but do you plan on dropping this novel? I’m only asking this because of the sheer lack of futa mc’s on this app and the authors who went down that path dropped theirs as well?
The story is very ambitious but I will give credit where credit is due and the direction is going fairly well so i give prob to thatBut the story is going on a neck-breaking speed, is not giving enough time for the reader to be immense into the world and character, i hope there's some breathing room in between.overall solid story
New book by ocheche and I'm loving itttttttttttt
as the author i will rate my book 5 stars..support me and your will never regret it.
Amazing. .
Hello guys, this is the author here!Well, at first I did not want to write a review myself. But after getting different reviews, and one even blaming that I don't even read their comment in my story.I was left with nothing but to write one.At first.For a new writer like me. Having gotten a comment is like a source of happiness and motivation, so I don't think I can comment on your negative remark.But if I am getting blamed, that clearly means you did not like the way the story is going or something that makes you not like it. So, I hope you can tell that directly. Instead of going about it in a roundabout manner.Then thanks again for writing the review.It meant that you read my creation, and that's something I'm quite happy about.
Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?
very good?? a great story to read. very good
Got my interest from the startI love this novel and it's my first time reading GL it impressed me................................
