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Completely worth reading..its kinda epic
I am Author this bulls**t novel. Grammar is c**p. I will release 3-4 chapters every week. Story Develoment will follow series anime. Protagonist have special abilities and can fast learn cause that ability. But MAIN PROBLEM IS ONE. He is so weak right now. He can became like human if he strong enought.If you reading this novel please help me fix grammar in this novel. Sorry for inconvenience. And thanks Reading my review.
The plot was interesting and great. great characters development. This web novel is amazing. keep up the hard work, author........................
5g Yeah i'm justh7thr775h5hh55hy55h5hh55h5h5yy44y4h5h5hh55hgr4g5yy5hh5h5tht7hthy8nthyjyjyjyj6jyjy8jyjyjujyjyk7kykuy8n8tj6j6j6jyj6j5h5h5hh577
Other than some spelling and grammer mistakes this novel is one of the best novel for a light read. Dont want to add spoilers to spoil the fun and can only say that you will not regret it
This story is a good read to try out. It starts off slow then it gets better at somehwere around ch.40. Most reviews are on grammar, all i say is come on humans arent perfect. Most reviews are also from those who stop at the first 10 chapters and havent read the whole novel. Give it a try If your have nothing to read.
Came here looking for copper and struck gold. In terms of story and plot, it does add its own unique twist to the whole monster with a system trope, which only adds to its entertaining factor. What really stands out however is the writing quality as it is extremely easy to simply flow through the chapters mindlessly lost in the story. Grammatical mistakes are almost non-existent and story development is quick. In terms of character, readers come face to face with a raging monster that simply wished to enjoy a better life, something all of us can relate to, and was denied that possibility. So I implore readers to sit down, get comfy and follow mc's journey.
Start is good, but need more release rates, waiting for more chapters,hope its more different than SAOwith this 140 characters are complete
Completely honest reviewI'm not a perfect writer, but I'll try to make the story as understandable as possible (I'm not very good at storytelling either)I will try to give life to everyone in the story, I do not like to see only the generic NPC of a game, I want them to also have a life, not only exist for my main character and the other secondary characters.Combat: I will try to make the combat between each character as detailed and understandable as possible and omit some sections in which the main or secondary character continuously kill the same species of a creature so that this scene does not become repetitive and boring.Detail of the world and the surroundings: I want to describe 100% the whole world of heart of the oasis, giving the reader the best capacity to understand the world in which the main character is currently.Quality of writing: speaking sincerely, I'm not very good at writing and may be able to find some errors in the text or even multiple errors, so I will keep abreast of everything.Speed of publication: I will be as fast as possible in terms of publication from one chapter to another, but I have estimated that it will be 1 chapter per day.Thank you for reading. I leave at your discretion how many stars think that this novel should have.
Author here: I WANT TO SAY THAT I AM PUTTING VERY MUCH COURAGE IN WRITING THIS STORY , AND I JUST WANT TO ASK FOR A SINGLE THING , ATLEAST GIVE IT A TRY AND GIVE FEEDBACKS ABOUT MY MISTAKE AND THE STORY , I WILL SURELY TRY TO FIX ALL THE PROBLEMS. THANKS.
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