The story is okay, but the Mc is way too stupid for his own good, I like how he helps his subjects, but every time he helps them he always leaves it unfinished leading to more problems to arise for them. His choices of taking in subjects that were his enemy is also stupid, but due to the story they converted to his followers because he is strong. The Mc could be way better than what he is right now, we also barely know anything about the world, also the characters are barely fleshed out, all we know is oh she got curves and she’s beautiful, that’s it. Overall my rating isTranslation quality: 5 starsStability of updates: 5 starsStory development: 3 starsCharacter design: 2 starsWorld background: 2 stars3.4 stars
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So good I hope the rest of a story will be translated. I adored it<3 Asdgghjllandjzizjqixneuhxhzuzuwuwiwisjzjxncnxmznzmssmskksskeiwiiwiwiwieirurjrjhrbrbfbxbxxnnzznnzznmaamakkalapqpqowieiriririrufjhxxbbxbnxnnnznnznzmakakqoowowieirieirideiduuruehebrbvv
Short review: Concept is interesting but writing is not up to par and very bad. (Ex: Like Madison Beer suddenly trying to make country music.)
I love the novel, the concept is so interesting and has a different feeling to just normal sexual novels, though I think the author could work on transitioning between different phases of subjects, other than that please continue to write and make chapters
Write whatever you want,but just dont let mc share his skills and system function with his harem members. System functions and skills should be his unique traits not for everyone.
It has some glaring weaknesses such as too many names and pwer ups thus reducng the quality of the story.I suggest a rewrite it wll fef up your game
To anyone else reading this,You just need to read the first chapter, which only just takes about 2-5 minute of your time and then you can decide whatever you should contuine. personally suggest you read at least chapter 1. I know i shouldnt judge a book base one chapter but first chapter hook me in. reading the book didnt get me bore and i know i wanst bore reading it because i summazie the chapter.I suggest adding a picture so that people seeing it wont irgone it.
Love the story so far, and it holds a lot of potential, pls never drop.wordfilllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
It is an very interesting story it my first to to read when downloaded webnovel and fun to readjdhrjbr unisex kickoff nrihvrjjrjhcjhrjjchhrbbfjjrbb
This is 1 of the best isekai of all times, a pity there's no more tan volume 13.But still a very good read, badass M.C. and funny.This is already a very popular anime too. Do yourselves a favour and read or watch this, u won't be disappointed.
I can't read anymore. As someone who is beginner(2years) in the martial arts world. Its highly unlikely for kung fu to be this powerful. I would have suspended my belief if it was cultivation but kung fu? Kung fu is ****! It isn't a martial art no more. Its just a stupid movement arts. Sure their flexible but any mma fighter/mui thai could literally kill this guy. Kung fu its useless maybe 500 years ago it was used but now? All the original practitioners are all died. (Great leap forward) search it. I just can't believe this guy is strong as I feel I could knock this guy out in 4 rounds. Just can't ****! I hate this feeling! I just finished reading The Reincarnation of the sword god. And was searching for a new mmorpg novel but why?