There's so much to cover but I can't spoil it, unfortunately! At first, I thought this was another eastern novel but I was quickly surprised with how fast the story shifted. Writing Quality: Despite the writer's first language not being English, most of the scenes are described quite well. Excellent story-telling and the dialogues are quite realistic. Remember, however, that not everything in a scene needs to be revealed to the reader, like specific locations, numbers, etc. leave a bit of imagery to the reader :)Stability of Updates: Too soon to tell but they seem to be on the right track. Just keep writing every day and try to make deadlines for yourself. My goal is 3 Chapters every day before the afternoon, practice makes perfect.Story Development: If I could go 7/5 I would! As soon as they talked about the borrowing system a few chapters in all I could think about was FMA and FMA: B regarding 'Equivalent Exchange.' I thought that was one of the most interesting concepts to ever exist in anime because the MCs aren't typically overpowered as they have to be creative with what they already have.You can already tell that the MC is crafty and resourceful, so it'll be interesting to see how he uses this new system and for what.Character Design: Excellent work describing each of the characters and making them memorable, from the names to the way they act. Bravo!World Background: I could easily visualize each place they were in, imagery is imperative in fiction and it seems like you know what you're doing -- you're already a ways ahead of your competition.In conclusion, love the book so far, love the idea, and can't wait to read more! P.S. With English being my second language I can totally relate to you as I can see the minor mistakes you're making in your work (imagery, diction, and sentence-structure wise) if you'd like to talk we can exchange discords :)
nicely done. I really like novels where the mc is not a human. The way the author wrote this book is very amazing!. Im hoping for more chapters!!???
Ive not read it yet this is just so hopefully it can get a star rating but it looks pretty good to me ive seen the first chapter and i like it no large grammer mistakes and sentences seem to flow good, So far like 4.7/5
enjoying the novel so far hope the author doesn't drop it.nice work btw ?? loving the novel will drop a power stone a day as long as you keep writing
What a beautiful story. This storyline is intriguing. This book has a lot of potential and great characters. Keep writing. Keep up the good work. ???
This troupe is quite familiar. And the name of the novel explained almost everything there is to know about this novel. The author's gradual unveiling of the plot is quite interesting. Nice one.
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I like how the MC knows when it's time to back off, he isn't reckless, he's cunning, and he doesn't give up when he's in trouble, or in a bad situation.
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The others were right, this does give me a faint sense of deja vu... anyone else reminded of [A Celestial Emperor’s Self-Cultivation] when reading this? To the person who was hoping for the plot to be original, wish for something more realistic next time.