are you okay author-san? I miss you...please come back soon.
what lessons I learned in this crap is when you give a person a system with an infinite points in it ,the person is gonna be arrogant and act like a fliping penis and that person's stupidity is going to be growing and growing no matter and how many lives he or she will live. he or she is still going to be a manchild or *****
I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE THIS BOOK. PLEASE FRIENDS, DOES ANYONE KNOW WHERE I CAN READ ANY OF HIS CONCURRENT BOOKS. I JUST LOVE HIS PROFICIENCY IN LITERARY TALENT.
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shameless review from this author come one readers i don't care if you focus on romance but i know there's a small community of kingdom building lovers and world building so come on comment and give me your ideas
The first 10 chapters were good but it goes downhill after that
The pace is too slow
The characters lack substance
The Mc character is unauthentic
Many supporting characters that are irrelevant to the story
i will not give a detailed review , i will only tell what i like the most about this novel i like the most about the novel is he does not have a solitude persona and have friends like literally friends with equal standing cause in most eastern novel mc has friends but they seem like little subordinate to mc
This novel is definitely among my faves. It's up there with Mech Touch, Chrysalis, Lord of Mysteries, and I became the Pope.I wish I could lock the author up and make him keep writing, but I understand he needs to make a living. Please give this novel a chance.
It look like Ai story the interaction look inhuman they all speak weird and don't feel real
Shameless Author here! Here are few questions and answers for readers:Question 1:Is there a System? : Of course, yesQ2:Is there a Romance? : Maybe possibleQ3:Is there a Harem?Answer: No!!!Q4:How does the story goes? Not a lone wolf story for sureQ5:Which Era does this story take place?: Not a Medieval Fantasy but more like a mixture of Medieval and Victorian Era.Q6:Is it a Sequel of Fire Mage?Yes, it's a part of AK's Universe. But same like RoA and Fire Mage, there won't be much interactions between two stories.Q7:Why are you stop writing the other novels and starting a new one? :Hmm, how should I say this. Main reason is because I'm not getting much revenue from the other two novels. Sad truth and only I'm to be blame for being lazy. And the other reason is because I'm planning on writing another two novels in the same universe and doing a crossover volume at much later date. But we can't do crossover in the beginning, right? So, I have to at least write all the five novels, let the MCs Rank up to maybe around Rank-8, and then do the crossover. Due to that, I can't finish any novel until that crossover moment is over. Alas, after that crossover, each story will progress in different direction like before. But of course, there will be some big major changes in all five novels too.Any more Questions? Ask below in the comment sections, I'll try to answer all.
Promising character and world setup.It seems like there is little to no power system, which i love for this setting.
Finally the ending! I found myself waiting time and again for the chapters every day! the test of unity is such a powerful concept and I liked that is what you played with. A look into the world, of society, of it’s own misgivings.. The world could be so much better with unity yet not everyone is willing to make that final push against the tests that are waiting against them..