I didn't read yet,
but just from the synopsis and the 'system' - 'fast cultivation' - 'Another World'.
You got my full attention...
Those damn 140 characters :s
This story is so catching and touching. The first chapters got me in my feelings already. It is amazing how good you describe the incidents happening, makes me feel like I am in the story myself. Well done!!!
What can I say? This novel is just another level, the grammar is good, and there are some mistakes but that's normal, and is more than possible to read it.
We have at least one or two chapters every week, and that's fine with me.
The story development is very interesting, bruh he is a WORLD, and the author doesn't hurry the story.
Furthermore, the character design and the world background also are very nice, character design can improve, but they have something uncommon, they are ALIVE. And the background is still making but so far is very good.
This is the first novel of this genre that I have ever read, and this actually made me interested in the storyline of this novel. Overall, I think this novel is good. Keep it up! Good Luck!
Lovely piece of work.
I love Chapter two.
It was a sparked up my curiosity.
Well let’s see how it goes.
I’ll leave another review later after reading more
let's just say I loved old man mc as long as they are not dumb enough it's acceptable to me
This novel really has an interesting and well-done premise from OP mc. Author san really has a good taste in nomenclature, which pleases me a lot. The only point I didn't like very much was the pseudo "break" of the fourth wall related to "authors" and "readers". And at the moment I'm reading (cp 40) the update stability really leaves something to be desired. The author said that he had problems with the Web novel, and that it has already been resolved. So I will trust my 5 stars to you author san. Congratulations and keep up the work well done! And improve the refresh rate! Of course, please lol
It started out with a great concept and decent story. Then it quickly degrades into a pathetic amount of time wasted by the reader as the author continues to make the protagonist a weak minded idiot. The classes the players get to chose are completely unbalanced and irritating. It's obvious that the author never did any research prior to writing.
An interesting take on mcu,but you could use a little improvement on the grammar and paragraph spacing. All is good though and keep it up good story
This is some good stuff.
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There is a lot better novel out there than this one. It's like the work of middle schooler author. Without the deep thought of how to write the stories.
Everything is near perfect, why it isn't perfect is that nothing is perfect but this novel is close to it. Writing is of top quality and you can really immerse yourself with this story. I recomment this story to everyone, even if you dislike an evil main character. I will definetly keep on reading as long as you keep those juicy chapters coming!