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I rate it 4/10, It is incredibly boring and the writing quality is low. The moment the readers could read a few words and still understand the flow of the story without loosing too much information let’s the readers know that it is of bad quality. The starting point till before the main character became a lich, it was still okay, however going past that the quality just fell off. So, I do not recommend anyone to read this novel.
it's a work of art the story is intresting which keeps absorbed in the story the backlog the chaps are too few , hope u keep up the cultural work
the plot is good and the character though it is not yet Deep but it's still okay
Loved the story and can’t wait for the ending. But why are chapters after 788 not getting posted to general readers? They are locked away, please unlock!!
Why the rating so low?? IMHO this novel has one of the best storyline in qidian, seriously. You wouldnt find a stupid arogant MC with godlike power like in most chinese novel, you woldnt even find a word like "slay everything under haven", "your grandfather", and another stupid chinese stereotype (not meant to be racist). In this novel you'll find a whole good story, ****** as that. A must read novel.
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Very innovative piece of work. It’s marvelous, the creativity.
Good grammar but the average " I'm bullied " cultivation story. The coin ability looks really nice which is why I wanted to give it a try but I simply can't. It just looks like the same old Chinese cliche. I would recommend those that are into " cultivation " to Defenitely give it a try. For those that aren't, I simply wouldn't bother.
The story is told to you and at blistering speeds. There are a lot of things that are glossed over or outright contradicted from previous chapters. Everything goes out of it's way to accommodate the MC and he has practically no struggles. Now as far as a story goes it's okay...ish. I'd categorize it as brainless reading cause I think that's what it takes to enjoy it. I will say that someone who understands good writing could probably rewrite and adapt this into something actually worth a casual read.
Don't go in! Mcs IQ done ran backwards into infinity^2. Man's should have been dead first day he transmigrated. Don't let this book get put up for translation. Let translation team do something else.
great story and very good to see the development of the protagonist since it is very real for a cultivation story with an interesting premise and development
One more question and did you stop with the novel for good or is this temporary hiatus?
The translation is very confusing at times and often uses words that have completely different meanings from what is intended. For example, not a single worm has appeared twenty chapters into the series. Instead, there have only been things like lizards, snakes, and centipedes, which are definitely not considered "worms" in English. One reader commented that the translation is supposed to be something like Gu, which is prominent in Asian horror novels involving evil magic creepy-crawlies and would make more sense than "worm." Another confusing detail is when a broken limb gets mixed up with an flesh wound or an amputation. A broken arm is much less of a problem than an amputated one, and these are two very different meanings in English. That said, it is possible to figure out what the translation was probably supposed to say.
When I first voted for this novel, I expected to see an MC who died with worms crawling over his body before he revives as an undead lich or something. Thus far, there are no worms, and the MC is very much alive. I assume the "worm" part of the title is a translation error, but I don't know if the "lich" part of the title means that the MC will die and come back as a lich later on or if this is also a translation error.
The story development is confusing, which doesn't help the odd translations. It picks up after the first ten or so chapters. The logic is skewed all over the place as far as characters and development go, but part of that could be a cultural thing.
The culture is very interesting to read about and is the main reason I am still reading this series so far. I'm not sure how long it will keep my attention, but the distinct culture described in this series is the only reason I've read so many chapters.
The MC isn't likeable so far and hasn't shown much depth. He has shown some development, so hopefully that will continue to be interesting. A cop has played a prominent role so far, but he is basing his judgement of guilt or innocence purely on his gut instinct and not evidence. There are cases I've read about where an officer has forged evidence because he "knew" the suspects were guilty, but they were proven innocent later. Naturally, the officer in question went to prison. The cop in this story is like that, and he's incredibly annoying and sullying the name of investigation. Then again, this is China, so I'm not sure if they prefer following feeling over reason as part of their legal system, unlike the one in my country. Otherwise, none of the side characters have been particularly likeable or worthy of attention.
Although the cultural details are interesting, there isn't much information about the world background itself. The storytelling is messy at best, and there's no clear summary regarding "wizards," who are more like evil sorcerers or witches in this setting. I'm not sure if any clarification will be added later. So far, there has only been a detail dropped in once every several chapters, so the system of magic or voodoo or using familiars or whatever exactly is supposed to be going on here doesn't leave any basis for the reader to understand it.
