Really nice so far. The writing quality is great and the written content is fun. The developments are a bit sudden, but its great theres not info dumps. Id rather the story is made in this way. The characters are OK, they werent particularly special and had pretty simple lines. Nevertheless, there was a lot of insteresting content that had me wanting to read farther than i did. I stopped and had to leave a review.
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This is amazing I really like it. You described everything so well that it seems to be real. I liked the character of Daniel he is epitome of matureness. You write so good keep it up.
I was already sad about the end of the lascivious apocalypse but now I get the news of your new novel, I'm looking forward to the next chapters, I hope it continues until the end. I'm using google translator, sorry if I'm confused.
I felt that this story was really subpar in the story, the characters, and the translation. The story isn't horrible but there's nothing that stands out as good. I feel like the main character was behaving uncharacteristically all the time. The character doesn't feel like he grows it feels like he just suddenly changes depending on the when the author, wants not needs, him to be that way. The translation feels like it's put together by multiple random people that don't know English. It's not unreadable but there are inconsistencies that draw you out of the story that's already hard to stay into to begin with.
Read it if you're bored but don't expect much from it.
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I have wanted a cultivation novel based around an auction house. I really hope this one isn't too bad tbh
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So far, it's a good start. The MC is not a battle maniac, which is a plus. He's also not a loner and seem to treasure his relationships. Additionally, the novel is fast-paced despite having some nice slice-of-life pieces. It is SO good!!!
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A decent novel, feels fresh, though a bit different tone than many others on this site. Like, imagine Plague Doctor, Thriller Paradise, Lord of Enigma or even Lord of the Mysteries (there was also another novel that didn't get out of trial, i can't recall the title that was going from parody to horror extremes and vice versa) - a dark world that is slowly pieced together for us readers, but it's.. not some calculative, confident MC, but two highschoolers that take the lead to unravel the picture, oh and they're so clueless about the dark side as well it seems like. The POVs are great, the background shown so far doesn't make the world any colorful, but.. at the same time, it's mixed with highschool reasoning and drama, haha. A really weird yet entertaining mix up. What's missing from this kind of setting so far in the 40 chapters is probably a sudden plot twist where sh...t goes down and the scene turns into bloodbath with these peaceful - at least on surface - people's heads rolling en masse. But honestly i like the current pace, so no need, no need. The things that bothered me though is the very concentrated exposure on the two guys, and the other thing is about the girl's mother - later MC realizes there's no such thing as mother and father because children are govt-raised. So.. how come the girl had an already dead dad, and lived with her mother for years when growing up? Did i miss something while reading at 3a.m.?