I Havent read a lot of novels in this app but i really appreciate that the mc is evil.
Keep up the good work :)
it's okay. But with a little bit more practice, and formatting, this might be worth the read. Btw author, do you have discord?
its really good , I love how you began the story am not a fan of horror but I will add this book and follow it to the end love it keep going thank you for this master piece
Bad not recommended but if you want read it then. Read it I already read this novel in the past I mean few months ago I was one of the new reader I stumbled this story and read for about 80 chapter but I quite love them but the problem the story I mean there are so many useless writing just put writing count and it was rushed because the author think the story is already good and the author tried not putting a cliche stories but it was still so cliche and can't do anything because the author only want word count and Not the story if it was for me but I think it was best read few chapter then if you love them then. Read it because the the story is like cycle
Just started to read it and wow it's a nice story. The first chapter in some ways presents everybody life: waking up late, job, family ect but it isn't boring and in some ways attracts you more to the story.
1. The writing is all done in the present tense for some odd reason, and is not very good.
2. The story is slow. You could read 40 chapters, and only a few days has passed.
The story so far (140 chapters in) focuses on the MC in the academy. It is a powerful contender to Harry Potter, I would say, in terms of hour it grabs your interest in the lore.
But, the slowness and the dragging of events as well as the bad writing plays to its detriment. It feels the MC won’t finish year 1 of school until we hit chapter 900.
So here's my review!Strengths:- Engaging post-apocalyptic world with OGI powers and hierarchy.- Action-packed scenes that keep readers hooked.- Superhuman abilities of the protagonist add excitement.- Mysterious characters like Mr. Mink create intrigue.- Flashback scene provides insight and hints at a larger story.Areas for improvement:- Abrupt transitions between scenes.- Pacing issues in certain areas.- Dialogue could be improved for better engagement.Overall, the story has potential with its engaging world, thrilling action, and mysterious characters. However, addressing the issues of transitions, clarity, pacing, and dialogue would enhance the reading experience. With these improvements, the story could become even more captivating and leave readers eagerly anticipating future chapters.
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So obviously a of negative comments, but the story isn't bad overall. It has good progression but author could explain some things a little better. Biggest downfall, is in the later chapters author just reuses/rewords the same action the MC/other characters do. Still ongoing and from what I've seen on other sites, it's pretty much the same thing. So not sure if author is having a hard time creating material or if it's just so that they can reach minimum words for each chapter. Honestly that's the biggest headache, reading the same thing 3-4 times throughout the chapter and in the end they've only done like 3 actual things throughout it. If it's a creativity issue then my recommendation is to just slow down on number of chapters per week. If it's cause they wanna be lazy and just use the excess as a filler to complete the chapter, then the readers that have made it to the later chapters will likely stop reading as well. Anyway, hope that bit gets changed but other than that I like the story so far
i have been hook in reading the manhua and started reading the novel and its grate. the cultivation ranks that i have not understand in manhua its easy to understand in this. thanks
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