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Petition to bring back The Era of Gods!.........................................................................................................
Do any of y’all Know the raw title for this novel? Or whether Or not it’s in M T L novel . com?
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Very hard to read, nice story but the grammar
Good read, the first chapter was good and the author did a good job with the introduction, I love a story when it is about war, it kinda gives you many ideas about an epic scene. Overall, not a bad novel. Great job!
Honest review time! 1. Writing Quality is great. I didn't find any difficulty in understanding what author wants to convey. 2. Updates are stable. No issue there. 3. Story Development is fine too. I don't see serious issues there. It has a touch of mystery which has been handled quite well. 4. Okay, character designs have some problems. First of all, I don't know how Zachary and Odette look in general and how they look in different scenes. They are good characters, but they feel a little empty, of course, it could be due to author using two MCs instead of one due to which each of them didn't get proper screen time. 5. World Background has not been fleshed for now. But giving 5 stars because it is only the beginning. Overall, it's a good novel with engaging mystery and even depicts mental illness which only a few dares to explore
The story has been interesting, looking forward to what's to come!???????????????????????????????????????
The story is comfortable to read, but there are a fair amount of grammar problems. We get a little snippet of most fight scenes and then the conclusion. I'd say the biggest issue is how every enemy is a total pushover. Someone shouldn't be able to give three full powered slashs before their higher leveled opponent could even react. Nearly every fight scene yet has such issues.
This novel has a very interesting concept and story. It is very refreshing to see something like this. The only problem is the author's writing style isn't the best, but I believe it will get better and they will improve tremendously with time.
Ch 1-40 great translation but ch 41 onwards translation takes a dive.Story it's self really interesting seems as if the mc taking the martial arts route in a cultivating world but still reach the peak of the world or so it seems would go. 4.8/5 But the translation ruins the story. The tl wasn't unreadable but name changes of cultivation realms, skills, and names.
the nice story drew me in immediately, the flow was amazing. The story has excellent character development, you become very attached to the main character quickly. good work author keep it up.
