GreenBlue17
i dont know if i want to read this book. 13 chapters in and you get to basic premise of the novel. basically he is trapped on a stone pillar by unknown entity. if he wants to live he will need to gather 1000 points while "acting" in movies. so i guess it will be something similar to terror infinity? cause of rather long intro i suspect that this will have lots of wordpadding, so i will not continue reading this.
That sad moment where your only rating after two weeks is from a random copypasta that went out to just about every fiction. Summary of NPC69’s life in a nutshell.
Random review from the author here mostly to tell readers more of what to expect. This novel is a concept of mine that I wrote when I was starting out as a writer a while back when I wrote mostly to just test things out, but lately, now that I've started to write longer works, I've gotten a creative itch to try to pick this back up.
So, without further ado, what to expect from the get go that I feel makes this novel concept a little more unique:
System/LitRPG/Evolution-
I'll be honest and say I always had a kind of issue with the system genre in that most of the time, many novels have MCs that have a system that seems completely out of place with the established setting which exists solely as a means to make the MC stronger.
I wanted to give the 'system' of this novel a more natural feel to it, and as a result, it is simply the evolutionary/upgrading process that the MC, a nonhuman, constantly evolving alien creature much like the zerg from starcraft, uses to consume and evolve with.
Which brings me to another point:
Non-human MC-
I have already written a non-human MC novel on this website, but the more I write it, the more I realize I could have explored the concept a whole lot more instead of having a character that was human at core.
Here, the MC is completely inhuman, an alien monster that was bred in a cocoon and meant only to destroy and consume. As a result, it is cold, ruthless, and inhuman in many ways.
I do plan on developing this MC's character so that it does not stay the same forever, but I will keep the core of its character as being fundamentally inhuman. It will never, as a result, become human for any extended period of time.
That was a long read, but hopefully that was informative. Once again, thanks for reading, and though I hope you as a reader enjoy my writing, I can totally understand if it is not to your liking as well.
First part of the story was wonderful, and the man will only get better!!! There weren't even fillers in the first part as the main character constantly got into new adventures. Can't wait to hear about this one!
I am enjoying reading this book so far till now hope to enjoy reading this book in future also and all the best to you dear author always write such an amazing updates
I am the author of this story. It is still under development. I would appreciate any constructive criticism. Not mean and nasty but actual advice about the points of review. Thanks!
i have absolutely no idea what the heck is happening, but i really like this story.
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While the translation quality leaves something to be desired, the premise and execution are well done. With regards to the missing chapter (singular) concerns are valid, it doesn't detract from the story too much. 1 chapter uploaded twice.Overall I really enjoyed this even with the translation flaws Who knows? Maybe we all have a little Joker waiting to be released...Looking forward to more
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I’m loving the story and the constant updates, keep up the good work on that front. But I’m getting tired of the MC, John, getting blamed for everything even if it is for “comedic purposes”, it gets old.Besides that complaint, this is one of the better stories I’ve read (especially on this site).
Brain dead MC with an indestructible plot armor.People says don't go more than 3 meters deep (because its very dangerous) but he does anyway.Butts in to other peoples business for no reason and the only thing he gains is enemy.Has an opportunity to learn skills ; he chooses the books based on their names. Not even opening the book to check out the descriptions or anything.Not to mention author making mc's soul beast look like a joke so that others can mock him.OH and mc never questions about the world he lives in, techniques that he's using.(If you don't know, ask your teacher... smh)Don't bother reading this.....100ch+
