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Shameless, Borderline Psycho, Cunning, Ruthless MC.
Awesome Comedy.
Younger Sisters- Mind you, its Sister's'.
Beat Taming.
Void Abilities- Space and Time (Maybe not sure.)
Exciting World Background- Universe Scale.
What more do you want?
Come, let's enjoy.
To be honest, this a great work with potential but i still feel like somethings are missing. These are my opinions tho:
Character development; This is a wizarding world, the character is a wizard and i don’t know what u have in plan for the mc’s character but his current character really ain’t satisfying. For a wizard, a dark wizard at that, i feel he is a bit too emotional than he is supposed to be. He has some subtle naivity( calm + curiosity could do the trick regarding his inspiration talent)which is not good for him as a dark wizard who is pursuing the ‘information manipulation path’. He lack the ruthlessness, calculative/ schemic mind required. His control over his emotions is also a bit lacking and his will is a bit too weak for an earthling who hold secrets hidden in his memories which he definetly cannot afford for others to see. Also, he lacks insights into the human heart and mind which is will be fatal to him if no change is made. With his knowledge of novels he read on eath he should know better than anyone the consequences of letting too much emotions affect his cause. As a dark wizard, his thirst for knowledge, rational thinking and spirit for reseach into the mysteries of the the multiverse is weak.
It’d be cool if he had some time powers added to his rune tho.
He could also create his own A.I to help with his informational path.
Also, about his information manipulation
and will path, you can gain insights from “ Cyher in marvel comics”, “ the middle chapters of the novel; ‘Original Seeker’ on comrademao.com or mtlnovel.com.
Agian these are just my thoughts if you deem them useless for what you have in store for your work you can ignore it.
I like it quite so far... I already read all released chapter so far. I like the way how you make the MC suffer to let the readers see that he is weak. .. Although the plot progresses in a faster way since it is just a few days since the Mc was transmigrate here, I like how the story develops. Good jod author. .Keep up the good work
First time I'm reviewing a novel. All in all, I live this book. There's little grammar errors that doesn't take away from understanding what's happening. The concepts used so far are interesting.
Only read 2 chapters for now. Need more chapters to discern the overall plot of the story, but so far it seems good and has the potential to turn into something big. Waiting for more chapters to be published.
Author here with a shameless review.... I love writing this story. This in a way is very therapeutic for me and is my momentary escape. I only hope that you find some enjoyment even among the misspelling and errors that im sure i missed. thank you for spending your time reading
So this story is really good!. I enjoyed DTNSOP but this is different from that. This book focuses more on love and drama and it really gets my readers bug going. PLEASE KEEP UPDATING
A very lack lustre novel. Surprisingly this Chinese novel is based in America aka A Beautiful country, but it just doesn’t work or do the story any favours. Set around Las Vegas, the story is about a hint system for nothing less than repo houses, or the like. Typical villainous bad guys who get their dues and of course the damsel, Sherriff Jessica.I tried to get into a sense of this is ok to read but it wouldn’t work for me so I decided to exit before I took any injuries moving forward. My recommendation, don’t bother and look for something else.
I have read up to 37 chapters at the time of writing this review.WQ 5/5 my standards are low if I unfairly compared it to Infinite Bloodcore then 2/5 and that's me being generous.US 5/5 idk SD 3/5 It goes against the title and slightly goes against the synopsis. The story development is good but I fear the author would ruin it in order for the story and title to match. He already killed off one of the male characters. Oh yeah I fear it might become a harem. I just hope Chase doesn't die less it really becomes a "harem".CD 3/5 Unlike others I believe all the side characters are fine. The problem is the main character. All the others have some humanity in them but I suspect the mc is either the child or the reincarnation of a powerful monster/deity/demon/etc. He starts out kind of caring and his murdering of monsters has a good justification yet he could kill a human just as easily and the justification is bad and easily broken. He makes stupid decisions like withholding precious information that could help the team with a dumb excuse such as "they are not ready". He hordes point even if his life might be in jeopardy just so he could "put points during the fight". There were no justifications during the zombie freezer battle and his "inexperience" is not an excuse because common sense exists and he uses it and even mocks his childhood friend with it. Not to mention chapter 36-37 mentions how smart he is when he was a child to be able to notice his childhood friends bad intentions.One of the reviews is right, there are many plot holes but it is mostly on the mc himself.WB 4/5 pretty nice and just like WQ I have a low standard for this otherwise it is the same 2/5 as WQ.
Website : Qidian China
Rating : 9.0(62)
Chapters : 2304
Status : ongoing
Rank : 232
Word count : 4.85 million
author level : 5
No of works : 1
Started : 2016-08-01
Chinese title : 永恒圣王
Looks like unpopular novel with rank in 200. But it has a rating of 9.0 and is given to Atlas studio. Maybe it's going to be alright in long run. It has tag "Arrogant characters", that's the only thing stopping me from reading this. Looks like there's no harem.
He doesn't have an editor and there are mistakes here and there. Plenty of laughs, and plenty of culture Kappa. Fine wine, is wine indeed!