I remember when this novel was the next up and coming big thing, then the author wrote it into a dead end and dropped it.
Kind of a shame to, as there was some genuinely interesting and unique aspects of this story, even if it was plagued with a plethora of shortcomings. Wish the author would take a second crack at it, but this time not write it into a narrative dead end and not add so much cringe. And for the love of god stop going off point and adding the endless amounts of pointless plots. That's my single largest complaint with this story, most of it feels completely pointless, and that's honestly what killed it.
Coming across this again has left me so discontented that it makes me want to try my hand at doing a story like this, because I guarantee I could easily do a better job. The premise is interesting, just that the author failed to capitalize on it, that's what bothers me the most, it could of been so, so much better.
The female rapes the male
Ok I did not know that.I have not even started yet.
MC is so dumb. She practically falls for every trap and doesn't know how to use the evidence she has to defend herself. And despite everything they've been through, MC is still not completely honest with ML and still questions his love for her so she is easily manipulated by their enemies.I don't recommend this book. It's too dumb to the point of constant frustration
She's stupid.
keep up the good work .I like how the storyline is developing .❤️
The story is quite entertaining.
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Wow amazing piece, really love your book. Good job author, I really like the way you explained your characters. Can't wait for more updates ❤️
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Oh. My these old men are too shameless and they are also displayin their shamelessness in front of their entire family. I have a hunch that ying is the son of general Lin from his missing wife or something like that, i just think that they are already with their biological biological family without knowing about it.
Not worthy of the rank of first on the site.
There is nothing special at all going on here. MC finds an old machine and because of boredom gains OPness. I've read bad beginning to novels but this one takes the cake at the character's opening lines being boredom.
If there were more chapters I might be able to rate this higher but there is nothing special to see here. Characters are plain and antagonists are your everyday classics.
There were even filler chapters in the first 20, come on now, I expect better from a first ranked novel.
Welcome all pervert.. This is the story for us.
Mc transmigrated and found cheat As soon As he arrived.. Cheat that required him to have ***. Who not jealous??