Warning!! This is BL!! That said it is a cute and funny read. If you like BL you will like this story. ??? ------------------_-------------------––––·––·------------------------
Haha found you ? so happy . Keep going. But the scenes are too raw ? to my likings. But I am??? so...... excited. Wish you all the best .
To be honest when I first started the book I wasn’t expecting much, but when you read deeper into the novel it becomes so much more intresting and while it may hint of other novels such as “Only I level up solo”, it puts a twist on those things making it have a overall charm to it. Overall it is a outstanding book and I cant wait for more chapters!
I was recommended this story by a friend and it is amazing to see something fresh on web novel. You are doing a great job author even though it seems to be your first novel keep up the good work all the best!!
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This is a surprisingly enjoyable story, feels light and upbeat even there is some early killing that doesn't seem to have any impact on the mc whatsover which is a bit odd for the character painted so far. Feels great for casual reading though. And the english is not as horrible as in quite a few other orginals on this site so you can enjoy the story without being distracted by odd syntax and grammar.
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I’m all caught up with this story now. It’s been an interesting read so far.Grammar-wise it has some errors here and there that makes it a bit confusing but it becomes clearer if you consider the context of the sentence.It’s not a bad translation better than most even but there is still room for improvement.Personally, I’m wondering about the direction of the story. If it will end with Liyue or involve nations like Inazuma and Sumeru in the future.
From 2 chaps I could tell this is good, wish it updated more though. Nice work! You did a great job making this. Now I'm spreading out this review so I can post it.
The author is really talented, but it's almost been a month since the break that was supposed to last a week. In these types of situations, I would like an update on why this happened so I know if its dropped or not.