MC is smart, atleast in the first few chps...his moments of intelligence was shown, that was dope,,ex: he secretly took over his clan despite being weak....[really hope moments like that continue. show moments of MC using brain,,,would be nice]...he is not stupid, he is ruthless, but not retarded....so yah, thats nice. Hope u dont make MC a show off idiot, [ show in right moments, i suppose]....add some romance, but dont make his lovers useless bitches that love him for his strength or looks, IDK,,make em help and protect MC and ****, u know, and not abandon him for clans and ****.**: MC should kill the princess
Read the synopsis, it caught my interest,Read 10 chapters.. I can say that novel is pretty good till now. I am going to continue reading it.. good storyline.. interesting plot.. writing style is very good. could not find mistakes.Author..plz continue with the updates.. and do not leave the book in between.
YOUR STORY IS NICEIt's great that you update your story often but It seems like You update TOO oftenyou have an average of making 2-4 chapters a day.../DO YOU EVEN REST?!/but i respect you because the book is amazing.(Im gay. /lesbian/ )
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What is this??....... Rather read the novel, i think i like to read the comments they posting about the MC in each chapter.,,, (-_-).The comments are more interesting than the story and the blockhead MC... (>_<).
Is this really the end....?it's so sad.... i was hoping that aurora would be able to beat the abyss and be with rita in the end.
something new to read, a very different genre, there was no novel of this kind yet out there, very refreshing, i like it a lot, i recommend for you guys to give it a try at list. you may really enjoy the novel, not like the otherstake care all :)
this novel is better than other mindless system novels, but still need to improve character development, dont drop because you can improvecontinue posting
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A very interesting story so far! I really enjoy the dynamic between the male and female lead. Joshua is a "mad scientist"-type guy who loves tinkering and coming up with all sorts of ideas just for the sake of it; while Catherine is a more down-to-earth, but ambitious person. It's often hard to tell who is the realist or the idealist in this partnership, which only makes it more interesting. It also never feels like one is clearly superior and could work on their own, as they complement each other.Speaking of Joshua, it's rare to find a good web novel where the MC plays a supporting role. Even rarer is an actually interesting plot with some intrigue and nuance rather than a brawl-fest where power trumps all. Catherine is already making progress towards her goals by building allies and thinking about the big picture (while simultaneously trying to deal with a complicated scheme against her), so I hope this carries on.One complaint I have is that Joshua feels like too much of a caricature right now. Sure, he got to say his goodbyes, and I can understand that his eccentricity is also a coping mechanism. Still, the guy died not too long ago and now finds himself in a completely unfamiliar world, forced to fulfill a role he never agreed to. I just can't see him coming to terms with the situation that easily. Plus, he should have unexplored sides to him and room to grow as a person, so I hope to see some development later on to make him more human and interesting.Now comes the elephant in the room: the writing. It's passable for the most part, but the punctuation and paragraph structure need some work. Commas are sometimes abused (or not used when they should be) to make sentences way too long. Combined with the occasional gigantic paragraph, this can make the reading experience very frustrating. They're not too difficult to fix, though: make more liberal use of periods, colons, and semicolons to break things up; and try keeping paragraphs to at most 5-6 lines.All in all, this has some serious potential, so I'm looking forward to the next chapters.
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reading for trial read, not expecting anything but found myself a good story. it's a system alright but the way the system works was different then other story so far and that's making this story unique. then I realized I have read and also liked another story from the author.