Everything is good but story is very slow paced . starting was amazing snd by far one of my top story development but it is very slow !!,!
Pls author fast pace the novel for revenge .
This is like the 4th time we see this type of novel. There was even a week with a PG and an R version of the same novel. I'm not giving it 1 star simply because ignoring the the fact that it's been done before, it's not an absolute waste of time. Of course, it has not been picked before as far as I know, so I don't know what follows the 40 chapters...
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Big fan of your work. My favorite is EVOLUTION:CONQUER. I have big hopes for this novel and love your work. I hope that you can get some art done of him and his daughter please.
A unique novel! I've read countless webnovel but this is the first time I read a novel with this kind of idea. It is written well, despite the author just starting his writing life. I can see the potential! Especially the author! Good job!
And I'm pretty sure that those who love slice of life genre, will like the story.
Keep up the good work!
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First of all, the idea of Anima is inspired by Gu from Reverend Insanity but I've put my own twist on it. Hopefully it's at least a little bit original and you like it.
Outside of that, I think the book is quite unique, especially in terms of how the world is and what the main character is like. However, I won't say too much other than that the MC is pure evil.
Best parts of the novel:
Characters - The main characters all have depth and personality, but it's not just them. Every character has at least some thought behind them, even throwaway characters. That means you won't get scenes where side characters act stupidly for no reason.
Quality of writing (I am English, I speak great English, don't expect spelling errors or anything)
World building - I've put a lot of effort into creating the continents, thinking about what species live there, what environments there will be and all that good stuff. I'm especially proud of the more that will start to be revealed as the novel goes on.
Bad bits:
Dialogue - Some conversations may seem a little clunky or stiff. This is the main area of my writing that I'm trying to improve, so hopefully dialogue will become more natural and free-flowing as the novel progresses.
Slow(ish) development - The novel isn't a slow starter at all, it begins with 3 high action trials and there are lots of fight scenes after that as well. What I mean is that characters and places will not be developed right away. I will take time with these things and you won't get huge lumps of backstory or information about people, places or things.
Changes in writing style - I have written other things before, but this is my first full-length novel, so my writing style will change and develop as the novel progresses.
P.S. I would really appreciate comments about which parts of the novel you enjoyed and which bits could be better. These kinds of comments will help me become a better writer, which will in turn make this a better novel. Thank you for reading and I hope you enjoy the book!
Wah Someone gonna have a baaaaad tooom! So idia is nice mc can go to other worlds and annoy someone who try to kill him -!!€&@+@(×#1881211 140 charcacters...?
Although this story might start slowly, the author wants to create a solid basis on which the plot will begin developing. Nevertheless, it's easy to follow, the main character is interesting, and the setting is full of diverse magical elements, races, and characters. Recommended.
This novel is over a year old, and idea I wanted to launch but couldn't get enough support and motivation to get through with. I don't know how far this would go, it's totally up to you guys, however. this is a novel unlike any other, so give it a chance, and join me on afrofuturist adventure across stars and worlds and an earth so different, it's a dream.
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a piece of advice
Cool LOOT/skill/Item/pets/some se* scene is all most reader want from apocalypse game world , well most chinese author know this so that's why they always get hight number of reader no matter how bad they'r story is people will still read it ALL FOR THE LOOT
ALL HAIL LOOT