A good novel for the weekend with a cup of tea and good music to vibe with.
The characters are decent and grammar are so-so but it was a good story nevertheless.
Keep up the good work!
Author , nice thinking ???, This novel is a new kind and a new type of a system besides the description was really great and treasure hunting sounds fun ??
Excellent work! I hope this book would bear fruit to you, author! And I hope your readers would love it! Writing quality for me it's around 4/5 (but I am generous right now so 5) There are multiple things I'd like to point out such as passive voice misuse, filter words, showing techniques, and some words that you need to delete. This include: *boring life (you need show the scene that would say that the MC has a boring life instead of telling it*no friends- the same goes to this one*was full of- passive voice misuse*he saw- filter words*he began to read- delaying the sentence*was sleeping-passive voice misuse
. I love it
thanks writer for this ???wonderful books of yours,it's very interesting and its quite lovely....????I appreciate it??????????
Came looking for silver and found gold instead.................................................................. .....................
Horror books are not really up to my league-so I don't know if I can review professionally. The book is good and detailed, yes, detailed, and I love detailed books. Kinds skipped some parts cuz i don't read gore, but this gives a wave of thrill in my system, kudos for that.
Other than quite a few spelling mistakes throughout the story chapters, the plot and characters are good. Definitely one of the better stories I have read, I certainly got engrossed in it fairly quickly. It doesn’t feel too slow at the begining and the Mc acts how you would expect, especially from being in a new environment with things he’s never seen before. And the Author does a great job of making you hate a character with a passion one moment, and the next have you actually start liking them. Definitely reccomend giving this a read, though I do feel it depends on the person whether you fully enjoy or mildly enjoy this story. Regardless, it’s written well, needing only some minor editing. Give a few chapters a read yourself and decide from there, at least 10 chapters would be my recommendation. Simply because opinions differ throught the first few chapters in every story and 10 feels the most optimal for deciding whether something is a go-to or no go. Happy reading!
Loving this one. Author characterizes really well with his informal first person approach. I was immediatly impressed by his ability to write, which exceeds many of the authors on this website by far. If you are a fan of romance, check this book out! You wont regret it. <3
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???? Very confused. This novel does not correspond to the raws.
Th MC should have a brother and not a sister.
The city is not called Gotham and the murders are different.
Seems like the translator is playing author. It would be good to receive some feedback from the translator about what is going on.
Very good, I just found some rushed parts and the cultivation level a little difficult to understand, with the protagonist managing to defeat the other two levels above