I can't bro imma stop right now because if I don't I will get a cliff hanger because it currently has only 11 chapters! This is soooo good! I can't explain it it's just that-! I can feel the momentum ya know? like the aura and the atmosphere of place and the people and how Mr. Passerby-Swordsman just appears and shows who's the boss!The names are good too and easy to remember and the writing style? Perfect!
Pretty good overall. Could use more interaction with outside races by now. but that's about it.
Good book loved the story development as well as writing quality
A wonderful book by an amateur writer. I cannot wait to read the next books by the author. I love her. Love you Kira.❤️❤️
just here for the fps mate sorry ........
i think it is pretty good you should tryreading it
This is a promising start to what feels like a gritty, character-driven urban fantasy. Connie’s personality shines through as a flawed but likable protagonist, and the world hints at fascinating depths waiting to be explored. With its strong blend of humor, introspection, and mystery, the story sets a solid foundation for future chapters. The deck of cards, in particular, is a captivating element that promises exciting developments ahead. Readers looking for a mix of urban realism and supernatural intrigue will find much to enjoy here!
interesting. I am fooling forward to new chapters.
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