It's only the first chapter and I can see the potential in itKeep up the good work
Well written, not a lot of America Football ones in here. This is a good one so far at chapter 20.
The world-building in this novel is on another level! Every chapter pulls me in deeper. This deserves way more readers
Everything about this book is really cute even with the character. It’s very interesting along with being different. I hope that you keep updating!!! ???
Dear Friends this is my new adult themed book. This book is not written for children or faint hearted so please navigate with care. I apologize here first if some of the contents are not appropriate for certain readers. Warning: The story requires the tone I set to fully embrace the setting I designed which may be offensive to some. Sorry again.Please feel free to give me your comments as the story is still progressing. your comments may alter the storyline in this book. Thank you Thank you so much for being here and reading this. Thank you and Enjoy.
okay imma be honest author I haven't read this yet,Maybe I'll try to but just by seeing the description it seems like any other generic novel.I liked your fanfics because there was always a unique premise and twist.But I am still giving it a 5 star
I'm only at the beginning but it's not looking good the main character is so nerfed his cheat is rotten for now ______________________________________
Great Book!!! I have finally find a captivating novel to read after skimming through the countless novels on Webnovel... I have finished the current ten chapters the author have written so far, and with that I think I'm eligible to drop this review...If you are a reader that love fantasy novels with magic, action, relatable characters and a perfectly built world that will immerse you into the story... I urge you to try this Amazon novel out and you won't regret it...The world building, character design, writing style and how things are slowing been revealed is all just so interesting... But I'm an eagerly waiting to see how Alvan began an immortal and what the curse was all about
A good novel that has good development and also reflects real life in the book. The writing is smooth and mostly without blemishes. I have to say, the author really did a nice job in the beginning
Waited months for this thing to be updated so i can binge read since it’s worthy of the title “good novels”…anyways WHERE’S THE NEW CHAPTER!!!
I came for the male lead but stayed for the plot. With every chapter, you can see Lorelei building her own character and becoming mentally stronger, especially with the male lead’s guidance. The story is so beautiful and well-written that I can’t wait for the next chapters to be released.
bro your story is really good the world building is good and clear the mc is not too op at the beginning which is also good and family this is unique most novel of this type don't have family or don't care about one this has a lot of potential don't drop this