Already hyped before reading the first Word of the first Chapter.PS: This is Book two and you should read rebirth of the strongest Guildmaster first.it is a masterpiece in my eyesone for allall for onego Elites go
I really loved this! It's so rare to find high-quality writing on WebNovel, and I devoured all 7 chapters. I love Eli so much; her personality is charming and endearing, and the story is surprisingly dark, which surprised me. There's some world-building happening at a nice measured pace, with an emphasis on character relations. Some of the writing in the last few chapters feels a little rushed compared to the brilliance of the first few chapters, but the author definitely has the capacity to produce a really high-quality story. Looking forward to see where the series goes! (Shipping Eli and Lara)
Dear Translator please resume your work. We are all thinking you got infected with corona and died since you went missing for so long. It would be nice to read the continuation of this story soon.
Translation Quality 4/5 ✖3
Stability of Updates 5/5 ✖2
Story Development 1/5 ✖10
Character Design 1/5 ✖10
World Background 1/5 ✖10
The total score 0.29714285 =1/5
Seshata has hit their groove early on in Humanity Online: Viren’s Refuge. Readers closely follow Erik Lieu in first person, present tense as he dives into the world’s first and greatest VRMMORPG. An elite gamer, his running narrative reveals him to be equal parts confident (bordering on arrogance) and vulnerable (humble enough to know when to laugh at himself). And readers will laugh! His self-aware, at times self-conscious, at times self-deprecating, cynicisms leave no one unscathed. His incisive wit (read: snark) dissects a well-planned world rich in detail, historical lore, and ripe with future potential. And not just gaming potential! The stakes are high in Viren’s Refuge with a sweetened pot provided by the games originator. And for Erik, making his way to the top is about more than just being the best — it’s personal, too. Action-packed cinematic sequences meld seamlessly with plot-turns and character exploits in chapters written so well they virtually read themselves aloud to you. This book is perfect for anyone who has ever sought the answer to - do video game Gods have a sense of humor? Or - what happens if the Chosen One loses his trousers? I can’t wait to find out, myself!
The grammar is so bad it's giving me a headache so I'm stopping here. I like the concept and it may have become one of me faves but the grammar and lack of care from the author to even try and fix it is killing it for me. It's one thing to spell a word wrong or to use the incorrect time but having missing words or phrases on top of all that just makes the sentences so annoying to decifer, that even my correct- as-I- read brain cannot keep up. That just means the writer didn't make an effort to even read the chapters a second time. Not being a native English speaker or having it as a second language is not an excuse for lasiness.
I like this book a lot but nothing has come for more then 3 months which is abit sad I hope its not dropped and will have more updates soon. ,..........
Why is your other novel is removed?
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Really interesting concept and the writing is done well, I dont understand why it doesnt receive as much attention as it should, probably because it still has very little chapter! Keep it up man :)
Good hope you updatI downloaded the Webnovel app to try to find books that I could enjoy because it takes a lot for me to actually want to stick in a story. I wanted a book with action, adventure, and heart. This book is all of that! Ruler of Iron and Flesh is one of the few books I’ve not only been actively reading, but I can’t wait to read more of! The passion behind the story and the creativity of each character is truly captivating! I’m on the edge of my seat to read more.
e more of this kind of novel
Just started. Only read a few chapters . But I am already thinking of dropping it. The grammar is horrible. And from the comments I have seen, the author hasn't hired an editor or done anything to fix this for the last 8 months. For those not bothered by horrible grammar give it a try. For me, it's a deal-breaker.
I’m pretty impressed. I think this is the most well-written of all the contest entries along with the top two in #73.
Your characters emotions are done convincingly enough, and the settings are clear and sketched out better than most. I also appreciate that you’re updating consistently with a good length per chapter.
Along with decent writing/grammar, I think update quality is the next most important in any story but especially for contests. I don’t know if the 10k words requirement to rank is being held in place anymore with stories having much less than that (like 1-3 chapter stories) getting ranked in top 10, but I hope it still is. It doesn’t look like that, but I like supporting the dark horses, so I wish you the best of luck. Hope you continue the story! (: