good for time pass until you got good novel
I'm trying to find something similar to this novel. Anyone? ?
I really liked how you portrayed this new Aria. It's obvious she's going to have to fight with her previous self to gain everyone's trust... And hopefully get back to her own world! It keeps me thinking on what's going to happen. Pretty good job!! Keep up the hard work, author!
hello dear author I will give my little review.1. I liked this story a lot, the romantic development of each character that I have been able to observe is beautiful and it is not immediate, it takes its time.
I like the different perspective. From the Killers eyes.
Great
Started really really well idk why but i love it (ashamed of myself) will come later to refix this if it get ban after some time cuz you never know with this type of novels hopefully it wont get droped
Let's just say I'm disappointed. If you want to read a story that all about misunderstandings then this is your cup of tea. If you've read ' I'm actually a cultivation bigshot ' then this is basically the same thing. Mc is ignorant and slightly on the dumb side besides the stuff he has "mastered." I usually don't write my reviews on these because of how little you actually get to know the story in 40 chapters but I can already see where it's going. If you want to read a story that isnt serious and maybe when you're bored and want a little comedy then I guess this will do. Hoped the author would've done better but I had me expectations a little high.
Author: I came here just to explain few things, first of all english is not my first or second it's the fourth language, and the only perfect sentence which my teacher praised was in eighth grade, later I never got any good marks, sigh. But I want to share the world and idea which seemed to be shared on the death stake, lol.
Second thing is that this story has well thought out chapter numbers and drafts, I wrote the Arch's number in the notebook too and how many chapters will be in total are already decided.
Last but not least, do express your words about the story, will answer whoever has rational question, xD
Honest review here. There are alot of errors in this novel. The story itself may be good, sadly its glory has yet to show due to this issue. Every time I open a new chapter i get bombarded by mistake after mistake. I suggest getting someone to proof read chapters or edit them. The potential is there. Sadly basic understanding of the English language is letting this novel down.
If anyone knows the raw can you tell me its really annoying how the webnovel creators just got rid of the original title at the bottom just so we cant go to other websits.
Translation Quality As Usual Isn't Ideal But I Can't Complain Either Since There Has Been Worse.
Stability Of Updates Is As Usual Since It's A Translated Novel.
Story Developement Is Quite Good As Although Check-In Novels Are Nothing New It Still Has A Mysterious Twist.
Character Design Has All The Cliches But In A Good Way Since There Has Been Very Little Of The Over Used Face Slapping
World Background Is Weird Since They Are Isolated But As The Novel Goes On Some Very Interesting Ideas Are Used.
Great Novel!!!
blacksmith novel aren't new and i used to like some but not that much. he can become knight, wizard and maybe add more in the future but the narrative is not my cup of tea it's not engaging enough for me to waste my time here.