es una muy buena historia los personajes están muy buen diseñados la trama de la historia es muy fluida y atendible pero la historia avanza muy rápido por lo demás vale la pena leerlo
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super enjoying the charachter developments is quite good the story is quite slow
There are minor mistakes in the writing, but the theme is good. I really liked the female character in this novel . I really enjoyed reading.
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This is translation review, not novel review.
If you are not familiar with it, webnovel has started westernizing most of the novels in 2021. This is awful practice that kills original novel. At best you get only names, places and organizations westernized and at worst you get half novel gutted and other half totally rewritten by translator.
With best case scenario you get only names, places and organizations westernized which introduces plotholes cause while names are westernized, actual writing and character culture arent. You get chinese way of thinking, chinese places and organizations translated into most famous western (USA) alternatives and as a result you see absurdity.
And with the worth case scenario, you are not actually reading original authors work, but some "translators" plagiarization cause half novel is removed (sometimes critical explanations) and other half is badly rewritten. And cause this requires so much work compared to normal translation, either webnovel is stealing original authors work and rewriting it (cause most of those novels dont come from qidian) or they are just using translators that dont know chinese so they are rewriting story with help of MTL (seen too many edited MTL translations lately on webnovel).
overall any westernized novel deserves automatic 1 star review.
What's with other people giving more than 1 star. A copy cat like this doesn't need to be reviewed. Just directly give 1 star.
Also Webnovel, are you guys not filtering what you upload? ?
Really interesting concept. One of the best novels of this batch, and it is similar to the AFK concept. It's kinda like a combination of a death game and AFK simulator, and it's done really well. It's one of the only novels that makes me feel like it's special. It's not one of the best written novels, nor does it have the best characters, but it's truly unique. I hope you can give it a try.
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Really Cliche Novel. Is a Orphan, described as extremely handsome, Everybody looks down on him. Gets Waifu/Loli Pet. Becomes Extremely Strong.
why this novel never get pick until now?
isn't this qality novel, i mean better than typical novel out there?[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]